5/14/2005 c1 23wishingdreamingwaiting
kick ass! so you're good at rhyming? excellent! keep writing, this was great!
kick ass! so you're good at rhyming? excellent! keep writing, this was great!
9/11/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
wow... I can definately realte alot.. I love the feed me your lies like candy canes.. thats very cool!
wow... I can definately realte alot.. I love the feed me your lies like candy canes.. thats very cool!
9/9/2003 c1 11Poetic Punk77
totally FREAKING awesome!The rhyming was incredible! I LOVE IT! thanx for reviewing my poem, btw. I took your suggestion. Again, good job!
~Carissa~
totally FREAKING awesome!The rhyming was incredible! I LOVE IT! thanx for reviewing my poem, btw. I took your suggestion. Again, good job!
~Carissa~
8/19/2003 c1 48Ivy Thorn
M, I think we've all felt like that at one point in time or another where no one wants to admit or hear the sharpness of truth and reality. Where do you think euphemisms came from. Anyway, this is nice, insightful work, nice. ^.~
M, I think we've all felt like that at one point in time or another where no one wants to admit or hear the sharpness of truth and reality. Where do you think euphemisms came from. Anyway, this is nice, insightful work, nice. ^.~
8/17/2003 c1 30dreamdiver
This is really good. I really liked it. I just started writing poetry and i was wondering if u could r/r some of my work.thanx
This is really good. I really liked it. I just started writing poetry and i was wondering if u could r/r some of my work.thanx
8/11/2003 c1 27Exceedingly Eccentric
Wow. I love this idea, especially the "Sweet lullabies" part. Great work, keep it up!
Wow. I love this idea, especially the "Sweet lullabies" part. Great work, keep it up!
8/9/2003 c1 11shaye 88
Amazing poem. The way you worded everything with the rhyme scheme fits together really well. Keep writing
Amazing poem. The way you worded everything with the rhyme scheme fits together really well. Keep writing
8/9/2003 c1 15fishdancer
This is really interesting. An interesting take on people who live in their own word of lies.
I think that it might have just sounded better without the rhyming, although the vocabulary is still pretty good.
Thanks for reviewing my poem.
This is really interesting. An interesting take on people who live in their own word of lies.
I think that it might have just sounded better without the rhyming, although the vocabulary is still pretty good.
Thanks for reviewing my poem.