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5/14/2005 c1 23wishingdreamingwaiting
kick ass! so you're good at rhyming? excellent! keep writing, this was great!
1/4/2004 c1 26arienaino yume
ye gads! i wish i could write like you!
9/13/2003 c1 2FiberglassButterfly
I absolutely love the first/last stanza. great job
9/11/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
wow... I can definately realte alot.. I love the feed me your lies like candy canes.. thats very cool!
9/9/2003 c1 11Poetic Punk77
totally FREAKING awesome!The rhyming was incredible! I LOVE IT! thanx for reviewing my poem, btw. I took your suggestion. Again, good job!

~Carissa~
8/19/2003 c1 48Ivy Thorn
M, I think we've all felt like that at one point in time or another where no one wants to admit or hear the sharpness of truth and reality. Where do you think euphemisms came from. Anyway, this is nice, insightful work, nice. ^.~
8/17/2003 c1 30dreamdiver
This is really good. I really liked it. I just started writing poetry and i was wondering if u could r/r some of my work.thanx
8/11/2003 c1 27Exceedingly Eccentric
Wow. I love this idea, especially the "Sweet lullabies" part. Great work, keep it up!
8/9/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
That's very true...some of us just can't to accept the truth.
8/9/2003 c1 11shaye 88
Amazing poem. The way you worded everything with the rhyme scheme fits together really well. Keep writing
8/9/2003 c1 15fishdancer
This is really interesting. An interesting take on people who live in their own word of lies.

I think that it might have just sounded better without the rhyming, although the vocabulary is still pretty good.

Thanks for reviewing my poem.
8/9/2003 c1 87Romantic Squirrel
Stunning!Great work yet again Keeper.

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