for Beaten Down1/11/2005 c1 
46Victim of the Wraith
I liked how it rhymed and yet still held a metephorical message. The language was a little racy but other than that it was great.
46Victim of the WraithI liked how it rhymed and yet still held a metephorical message. The language was a little racy but other than that it was great.