for Anatomy of an Asthma Attack6/22/2010 c1 
75Burnin Heart
It started off really well, really enjoyed the beginning bit, but the end is a little unrealistic in terms of timing - because you build up the suspense and then it within just a few lines, it's good news. I'm asthmatic as well, but in my experience of asthma attacks - it takes quite some time to be able to go 'back to normal'. :)
75Burnin HeartIt started off really well, really enjoyed the beginning bit, but the end is a little unrealistic in terms of timing - because you build up the suspense and then it within just a few lines, it's good news. I'm asthmatic as well, but in my experience of asthma attacks - it takes quite some time to be able to go 'back to normal'. :)
8/9/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
This is pretty interestin.. Unqiue really..
Never seen anything like this.. Creative, and quite new.. Hmm, I liked it..
It was broken down quite well and the short lines added to the intensity of the piece..
Cool, this was quite well done..
I liked it..
MM, good ending..
Keep it up..
~Shadafakup
38ShadafakupThis is pretty interestin.. Unqiue really..
Never seen anything like this.. Creative, and quite new.. Hmm, I liked it..
It was broken down quite well and the short lines added to the intensity of the piece..
Cool, this was quite well done..
I liked it..
MM, good ending..
Keep it up..
~Shadafakup