
8/16/2003 c1 Teefah
*sigh*... simply captivating... I can't imagine anyone (with a poet's soul) could ever get turned off by this. Can't help but love it.
*sigh*... simply captivating... I can't imagine anyone (with a poet's soul) could ever get turned off by this. Can't help but love it.
8/14/2003 c1
43Carter Tachikawa
Very, very nice. The lines are beautiful. I think I like the last one best. Anyway, great poem. Keep it up.
~CT

Very, very nice. The lines are beautiful. I think I like the last one best. Anyway, great poem. Keep it up.
~CT
8/13/2003 c1 Deana Bell
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! Sorry, but it is. I can't put my finger on exactly what I like about it, but there's something there...
~God bless~
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL! Sorry, but it is. I can't put my finger on exactly what I like about it, but there's something there...
~God bless~
8/13/2003 c1
36obsidian katana
beautiful piece. well written, inspiring and encouraging. i really like it. great job. keep on writing!

beautiful piece. well written, inspiring and encouraging. i really like it. great job. keep on writing!
8/12/2003 c1
57teh tarik
The last line was awesome. The whole tanka was extremely well-written. Loved this to bits!~

The last line was awesome. The whole tanka was extremely well-written. Loved this to bits!~
8/12/2003 c1
14Dirty Wallpaper
beautiful, the meaning and the significance to life itself to some people was amazingly conveyed. i loved it, im speechless. i hvae such a lovely and delicate image in my head of a butterfly flying towards a speck of light in darkness - such a strong image, so wonderful, so many kudos to you

beautiful, the meaning and the significance to life itself to some people was amazingly conveyed. i loved it, im speechless. i hvae such a lovely and delicate image in my head of a butterfly flying towards a speck of light in darkness - such a strong image, so wonderful, so many kudos to you
8/11/2003 c1 Reina-chan
Not only you are great in writing fics, you are also very good in poems! You're talented!
Not only you are great in writing fics, you are also very good in poems! You're talented!