
8/10/2003 c1
17Winged One1
This is beautiful. Your poems are so lovely, they seem peaceful and...I can't think of the word. Poo. I love the last line, it's awesome.
winged one
p.s. thanks for the Review! :D

This is beautiful. Your poems are so lovely, they seem peaceful and...I can't think of the word. Poo. I love the last line, it's awesome.
winged one
p.s. thanks for the Review! :D
8/10/2003 c1
76CoolBeans18s
Wow! This was so..peaceful, yet...deep Especially the last line:
Cry; you will soon be flying
Pure brilliance. I love it!
~ CoolBeans18s

Wow! This was so..peaceful, yet...deep Especially the last line:
Cry; you will soon be flying
Pure brilliance. I love it!
~ CoolBeans18s
8/10/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Another terrific piece! You are definitely maturing in your poetry, and you have proven that poets only improve with age.
Another terrific piece! You are definitely maturing in your poetry, and you have proven that poets only improve with age.