for Die of a Broken Heart8/10/2003 c1 
63Tormented Romantic
aw...this was so wonderfully beautiful in it's own angsty way. It was just overflowing with emotion and it made me ache right there w/ you. I think we all know the feeling, but you captured it in a way that was so unique and so eloquent...Amazing, that's the word. The flow was a bit thrown off by the changing rhyme scheme but it was so wonderfully written that it more than made of for it.
and I think that all of us who are w/o that 'someone' have been thinking about it lately just w/ the end of the summer nearing (or maybe already over for you) and whatnot. Don't dwell on it though, "he's" out there somewhere and it's when you least expect it that he will come into your life.
take care,
tormented romantic
63Tormented Romanticaw...this was so wonderfully beautiful in it's own angsty way. It was just overflowing with emotion and it made me ache right there w/ you. I think we all know the feeling, but you captured it in a way that was so unique and so eloquent...Amazing, that's the word. The flow was a bit thrown off by the changing rhyme scheme but it was so wonderfully written that it more than made of for it.
and I think that all of us who are w/o that 'someone' have been thinking about it lately just w/ the end of the summer nearing (or maybe already over for you) and whatnot. Don't dwell on it though, "he's" out there somewhere and it's when you least expect it that he will come into your life.
take care,
tormented romantic
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Very good. The only thing that bugs me a little is the changing rhyme scheme but the good meaning makes up for that.
Very good. The only thing that bugs me a little is the changing rhyme scheme but the good meaning makes up for that.
8/10/2003 c1 120Heather Montgomery
Another gorgeous poem, melamin! You're incredibly talented, babe! I love this poem, it's very sad but it has kind of an undertone of strength. It's great. I miss you, vanima!
Hez
120Heather MontgomeryAnother gorgeous poem, melamin! You're incredibly talented, babe! I love this poem, it's very sad but it has kind of an undertone of strength. It's great. I miss you, vanima!
Hez