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11/7/2005 c1 23Stormyfirefly2
sad...its all i can say.
11/30/2004 c1 prayers for rain
I can identify myself pretty well with your poem. Cutting just to see the blood and to know that you're real and that you live... Great work.
11/19/2003 c1 25suicidel angel
i like the whole word play thing, it's short but effective
11/13/2003 c1 16New Age Prophet
Really fucking intense. Counseling not to be rude but serious cutting yourself is not shit that your friends can help you with. Go to counseling really.
10/6/2003 c1 8Lost-in-Insanity
This one t'is strange ^^; good, still strange
9/30/2003 c1 26wordpainter241
My God you rock... (and I need to expand my review vocabulary)
9/29/2003 c1 1Izzy Diz
I like the title.. It grabbed my attention quite quickly.. Well done! You live! ~Bwahahaha~ *cough* Sorry ^_^'

Izzy Diz

Ps- GO AUSTRALIA! ^_^
9/29/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
ah it's you... hello, nice to see you're branching out into new screenies...

this was great... the second stanza really kicked something... i've been guilty too... good job!
9/5/2003 c1 43lronMaiden
Great poem, I like it 'cos it's freaky and very real...kep up the work.

ps. Thanks for the comment on Terra Australis...I was wondering why you liked that particular section until I found out you were from Australia. lol.

AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE! OI OI OI!
8/30/2003 c1 47The intellect
i love the title... really cool for some random reason.

''And I cut myself tonight

Just to prove I could''

i love this bit... makes out like your trying to make a stand to someone

maybe a bit too much repeating of blood and bleed?

the intellect
8/25/2003 c1 psycho tabby cat
Sorta sad...

I think the scary thing is that I can sorta see why somebody would do that...

The repetion is good, well written

D
8/22/2003 c1 10My Works 87
Wow, this is kind of creepy, yet it makes complete and total sense to me. Does that make sense? I don't cut myself or anything (not that you though I did) but her/his reasons behind doing it are understandable. After reading this poem I want to find the person and help them out. Is that wierd? Maybe my maternal instincts! haha. Very good job, bravo!
8/18/2003 c1 9ironic li
"when everything feels like the movies/yeah you'd bleed just to know you're alive" -goo goo dolls, iris.

i think that this carries the essence of mankind thinking that we are great, and that we have knowledge and power, and yet most of us aren't really sure who we are.

ISL
8/18/2003 c1 meudick
Really?

You? Bleed?

My, my that is strange isn't it?

I never wouldn't predicted that outcome.

Excuse the bitch talking, I'm back to my original self, but since there's at least three of me, God knows who that actually IS!

I love ya, and I understand ya, you know that.

And you know that this rulz.

And you know that I can relate to this.

And you know who this is. I don't actually have to be bothered loging in do I?

PS I love you... (there, if you don't know who it is now, ask yourself how many strangers go around saying they love you...)
8/12/2003 c1 3LLight
... its really good, i need to see the life flowing from me sometimes too just to assure myself that I'm real... you seem to know where I'm coming from, or I think you do cuz I want someone to know where I'm comin from, hehe...

great poem, keep writing.
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