
1/15/2004 c1 Eladriewen not signed in sorry
This is very good, only instead of saying "u" perhaps try saying "you". Still, very good. I see you like writing poetry. When I get the time I'll have to sift through more of these. You have a promising talent. ^_^
This is very good, only instead of saying "u" perhaps try saying "you". Still, very good. I see you like writing poetry. When I get the time I'll have to sift through more of these. You have a promising talent. ^_^
11/28/2003 c1
3Enchantressofthestars
This is kewl!It sounds like me so much!it brought tears to my eyes. GOOd job!

This is kewl!It sounds like me so much!it brought tears to my eyes. GOOd job!
8/11/2003 c1
41Razor Sharp Kisses
Really good. I can relate to that poem on many levels, and on many days.

Really good. I can relate to that poem on many levels, and on many days.