
7/18/2005 c1
8Lyra Torg
Just a note to the previous most recent reviewer: I know the story's not perfect. I could really care less that it's not because I wrote it a while ago and I don't intend to update or continue it. I understand it you don't like my writing style but that's your personal opinion, which I would've thought it better if you'd e-mailed me personally instead of posting on my review page. Maybe we could've had a discussion about it. Otherwise, I'm moving on and I hope you do as well.

Just a note to the previous most recent reviewer: I know the story's not perfect. I could really care less that it's not because I wrote it a while ago and I don't intend to update or continue it. I understand it you don't like my writing style but that's your personal opinion, which I would've thought it better if you'd e-mailed me personally instead of posting on my review page. Maybe we could've had a discussion about it. Otherwise, I'm moving on and I hope you do as well.
2/12/2004 c14
1The baava Project
Er . . . uh huh. ^_^;;
Hiya, Lyra! I'm back! I was offline for quite some time there but I guess I just couldn't stay away after all. NOW I'm finally starting to understand what Nathan's deal is, but I'm a bit confused as to where you're actually going with the whole story. I'm sure it will become more clear when I finally catch up - but it's getting a tad weird. lol
Or maybe it's supposed to be weird! LOL
matta ne,
LoK

Er . . . uh huh. ^_^;;
Hiya, Lyra! I'm back! I was offline for quite some time there but I guess I just couldn't stay away after all. NOW I'm finally starting to understand what Nathan's deal is, but I'm a bit confused as to where you're actually going with the whole story. I'm sure it will become more clear when I finally catch up - but it's getting a tad weird. lol
Or maybe it's supposed to be weird! LOL
matta ne,
LoK
1/27/2004 c26 SREFiction
it was a nice ending, albeit slightly short. I would love to read a sequel. I hope you decide to continue your other story as well.
Mystery-chick
it was a nice ending, albeit slightly short. I would love to read a sequel. I hope you decide to continue your other story as well.
Mystery-chick
1/20/2004 c13 The baava Project
Hey wait! What happened? Was it a dream or not?
By the way, I agree with Fred! lol
You've seriously got me hooked . . . chapters are almost too short. ^_~ I'll be back!
ja,
LoK
Hey wait! What happened? Was it a dream or not?
By the way, I agree with Fred! lol
You've seriously got me hooked . . . chapters are almost too short. ^_~ I'll be back!
ja,
LoK
1/13/2004 c25 SREFiction
Very interesting developement...i wonder what he knew. Update soon!
Mystery-Chick
Very interesting developement...i wonder what he knew. Update soon!
Mystery-Chick
1/12/2004 c12 The baava Project
Whoa, we've taken an odd twist here, haven't we? ^_^;; I had a great visual of Alexis sitting on the chair as Nathan tried to get through the cupboard, heehee.
Man, did she get a concussion or something? O_o And how much longer is Nathan going to harass her until someone else finds out?
^_^ be back later!
LoK
Whoa, we've taken an odd twist here, haven't we? ^_^;; I had a great visual of Alexis sitting on the chair as Nathan tried to get through the cupboard, heehee.
Man, did she get a concussion or something? O_o And how much longer is Nathan going to harass her until someone else finds out?
^_^ be back later!
LoK
12/22/2003 c11 The baava Project
Lyra - I am truly impressed at the magnitude of this work. When I stumbled across it a couple of months ago (whenever that was) I had no idea really where it would go or even how well.
Nathan's a PERV. heehee And Alexis is so sadly naive. I sincerely hope she gets through this okay! ^_~
bbl,
LoK
Lyra - I am truly impressed at the magnitude of this work. When I stumbled across it a couple of months ago (whenever that was) I had no idea really where it would go or even how well.
Nathan's a PERV. heehee And Alexis is so sadly naive. I sincerely hope she gets through this okay! ^_~
bbl,
LoK
12/8/2003 c10 The baava Project
WHOA! Didn't see that coming! What a shocking chapter this was, Lyra. Very well written, though still completely bizarre. Alexis is in a very awkward situation indeed.
Can't wait to read more!
LoK
WHOA! Didn't see that coming! What a shocking chapter this was, Lyra. Very well written, though still completely bizarre. Alexis is in a very awkward situation indeed.
Can't wait to read more!
LoK
12/7/2003 c22 Jane
Uh-oh, she's in trouble.. those were great chapters. Post more son!
Uh-oh, she's in trouble.. those were great chapters. Post more son!
12/6/2003 c22 SREFiction
This could be very bad for Alexis...oh man...please update soon! I love how the story is coming.
Mystery-Chick
This could be very bad for Alexis...oh man...please update soon! I love how the story is coming.
Mystery-Chick
12/4/2003 c18 SREFiction
oh man...Nathaniel is a pain in the @$$ anyway good chapter. Update Soon!
Mystery-Chick
oh man...Nathaniel is a pain in the @$$ anyway good chapter. Update Soon!
Mystery-Chick
12/3/2003 c9 The baava Project
Hmm. There wasn't really anything very remarkable about this chapter, but I am impressed at how much has been told already in only nine chapters of story! ^_^ It's wonderful that you stuck with this beyond even this chapter, and I do hope to catch up to you sometime. lol
Nathan, I have to say, is one BIZARRE character. I sure hope Alexis really is okay (what WAS that stuff anyway?).
ja!
LoK
Hmm. There wasn't really anything very remarkable about this chapter, but I am impressed at how much has been told already in only nine chapters of story! ^_^ It's wonderful that you stuck with this beyond even this chapter, and I do hope to catch up to you sometime. lol
Nathan, I have to say, is one BIZARRE character. I sure hope Alexis really is okay (what WAS that stuff anyway?).
ja!
LoK