for Devotion6/1/2004 c1 Jena
Okay so ive read and re-read most of your stuff and my i still think its all awesome, Dude you can make it somewhere, people would kill to be able to write like you can, and i am one of those people. but remember, im your stalker and i only kill cereal and drink cherry coke. Awesome stuff man.
Okay so ive read and re-read most of your stuff and my i still think its all awesome, Dude you can make it somewhere, people would kill to be able to write like you can, and i am one of those people. but remember, im your stalker and i only kill cereal and drink cherry coke. Awesome stuff man.
3/25/2004 c1 
12ZiggyGurl
I've reviewed for a couple of your stories/poems/songs before. This one was really good. I like your work.
12ZiggyGurlI've reviewed for a couple of your stories/poems/songs before. This one was really good. I like your work.
8/25/2003 c1 Haz Almighty
this is gd, i got a bit confused but then i read it a few more times and its gd, but i dunno if its a poem or song either lol. well done though!
this is gd, i got a bit confused but then i read it a few more times and its gd, but i dunno if its a poem or song either lol. well done though!
8/12/2003 c1 11DreamNightmare
i think its ur best so far lol...even if u dont think so :P
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarei think its ur best so far lol...even if u dont think so :P
DreamNightmare
8/12/2003 c1 17Winged One1
I love the line 'What you demand, demands sacrifice'
Great song...the idea is awesome sauce.
winged one
17Winged One1I love the line 'What you demand, demands sacrifice'
Great song...the idea is awesome sauce.
winged one
8/12/2003 c1 Sunlit Rain
Very nice. A refreshingly unusual format. Has a good rhythm and good wording.
Very nice. A refreshingly unusual format. Has a good rhythm and good wording.
8/12/2003 c1 power-of-one
whaddaya mean that i won't like it? well, I LOVE it! the time it takes, doesn't matter, but what matters is, if the time was worth it! take it from me... i write songs for my garage band... you are great!
whaddaya mean that i won't like it? well, I LOVE it! the time it takes, doesn't matter, but what matters is, if the time was worth it! take it from me... i write songs for my garage band... you are great!