for Waiting12/20/2003 c1 
12Rocky G
A wondeful poem, I can relate to it. i think we all have had crushes from a far, this poem is a great description of that feeling. I enjoyed reading it.
12Rocky GA wondeful poem, I can relate to it. i think we all have had crushes from a far, this poem is a great description of that feeling. I enjoyed reading it.
11/18/2003 c1 28frugale
That's TERRIFIC! This poem really stands out of its kind! Perfect ponctuation, and the feeling is expressed very well. First try? Congratulations!
28frugaleThat's TERRIFIC! This poem really stands out of its kind! Perfect ponctuation, and the feeling is expressed very well. First try? Congratulations!
11/17/2003 c1 121Seeker of the Way
This is me! I am an introverted extrovert. I do not want to hurt anybody and was made to feel inferior in school.
So, I show my self a little, and just hope the other person sees something worthy of communicating with me.
Nice poem!
121Seeker of the WayThis is me! I am an introverted extrovert. I do not want to hurt anybody and was made to feel inferior in school.
So, I show my self a little, and just hope the other person sees something worthy of communicating with me.
Nice poem!
11/12/2003 c1 15BecomingMyself
Short, with simple wording, deepening the meaning of this tiny piece of nicely written work...
Good one!
15BecomingMyselfShort, with simple wording, deepening the meaning of this tiny piece of nicely written work...
Good one!
8/23/2003 c1 Desire Me
::Claps:: Lovely! nice poem! loved it.
Thanks for the review! hey, question,. should i give the character a name? Because i'm adding a twist to it. The next chapie will be up soon. Just tell me if u think it's good without names or should i start adding names?
~*~Desire Me~*~
::Claps:: Lovely! nice poem! loved it.
Thanks for the review! hey, question,. should i give the character a name? Because i'm adding a twist to it. The next chapie will be up soon. Just tell me if u think it's good without names or should i start adding names?
~*~Desire Me~*~
8/13/2003 c1 12gettingby
I like to review reviewers and I like that I don't have to lie when I tell you that I like this poem :)
12gettingbyI like to review reviewers and I like that I don't have to lie when I tell you that I like this poem :)
8/13/2003 c1 Kezarahk
Wistful devotion? Brevity; like a still, small voice, not expecting to be noticed anytime soon.
Thanks for your review. =)
Wistful devotion? Brevity; like a still, small voice, not expecting to be noticed anytime soon.
Thanks for your review. =)
8/12/2003 c1 JazzeeT
this is nice, short and sweet and expressive. unrequited. thanx for reviewing me thing for me.
this is nice, short and sweet and expressive. unrequited. thanx for reviewing me thing for me.
8/12/2003 c1 64Juliet Squared
absolutely amazing
you could make it a little longer tho. Its one of those kinds of poems that you want to read more and more, so dont make it too short...
64Juliet Squaredabsolutely amazing
you could make it a little longer tho. Its one of those kinds of poems that you want to read more and more, so dont make it too short...
8/12/2003 c1 3Just a gurl
very good for your first poem um... if you wanted me to give you tips on how to do better and tell you what is wrong with this piece i'm not very good at that:) but i thought it was very god keep writing
just a gurl
3Just a gurlvery good for your first poem um... if you wanted me to give you tips on how to do better and tell you what is wrong with this piece i'm not very good at that:) but i thought it was very god keep writing
just a gurl