for Only Words2/2/2004 c1 
27live fast die pretty
Thats really good, rhyming is just right =) I really like this poem
27live fast die prettyThats really good, rhyming is just right =) I really like this poem
12/30/2003 c1 14Angel Nazi
that opening line was so powerful it had, lots of anger kewl job! could you read my poem called pain
than a buch!
14Angel Nazithat opening line was so powerful it had, lots of anger kewl job! could you read my poem called pain
than a buch!
11/4/2003 c1 16grim'alkin
hey! thanks for the review. If i ever post a poem again, can you please reveiw it too? loved to hear whatever you have to say (flames, or not). OK, now, the poem- rhymed. Hmm, i don't often find poems that rhym that i actually really like, but this one is one of them. I liked the phrasing- truly beautiful. Fav. list.
Ps. sorry if you didn't feel aything in my poem- maybe it's because when i wrote it, it was out of frustration that i couldn't write! it's something that came together like a very undone book. *sighs* i promise to post something better next time.
16grim'alkinhey! thanks for the review. If i ever post a poem again, can you please reveiw it too? loved to hear whatever you have to say (flames, or not). OK, now, the poem- rhymed. Hmm, i don't often find poems that rhym that i actually really like, but this one is one of them. I liked the phrasing- truly beautiful. Fav. list.
Ps. sorry if you didn't feel aything in my poem- maybe it's because when i wrote it, it was out of frustration that i couldn't write! it's something that came together like a very undone book. *sighs* i promise to post something better next time.
10/5/2003 c1 96Kenske
Spiffy! I like this one! It's all very good except for that last line...it seems just not to work. maybe "Someone save me" would work a tad better? But I know the meaning wouldn't be the same though. That's just me! and I'm werid. But good poem none the less!
96KenskeSpiffy! I like this one! It's all very good except for that last line...it seems just not to work. maybe "Someone save me" would work a tad better? But I know the meaning wouldn't be the same though. That's just me! and I'm werid. But good poem none the less!
9/16/2003 c1 Sarah
I really like this poem, I had to read it twice, I love the ending. words, words nothing's bleeding, God save me. That was awesome! well I g2g, ttyl
I really like this poem, I had to read it twice, I love the ending. words, words nothing's bleeding, God save me. That was awesome! well I g2g, ttyl
9/16/2003 c1 Sarah
I really like this poem, I had to read it twice, I love the ending. words, words nothing's bleeding, God save me. That was awesome! well I g2g, ttyl
I really like this poem, I had to read it twice, I love the ending. words, words nothing's bleeding, God save me. That was awesome! well I g2g, ttyl
8/23/2003 c1 Nothing Extraordinary
Very pretty in a upsetting way, I enjoyed it though, how you worded everything
Very pretty in a upsetting way, I enjoyed it though, how you worded everything