for Her Forbidden Past2/4/2005 c47 gram
I just read this entire story in one sitting. I t is so good! You need to update soon. Please.
I just read this entire story in one sitting. I t is so good! You need to update soon. Please.
6/20/2004 c19 
15I-Wuv-Muffins
Hey Taken! thanks for the review! but I have one thing.. I know I quit my story and all, but I've started a new one! and it has 2 chappies already! so if you're interested, check my profile... ish called "of dragon wings" anywho, I couldn't find a good chapter that I had not already reviewed on XD so yah... that's why ish on this chapter! but yeah! thanks again!
15I-Wuv-MuffinsHey Taken! thanks for the review! but I have one thing.. I know I quit my story and all, but I've started a new one! and it has 2 chappies already! so if you're interested, check my profile... ish called "of dragon wings" anywho, I couldn't find a good chapter that I had not already reviewed on XD so yah... that's why ish on this chapter! but yeah! thanks again!
6/6/2004 c47 cassie
very, very engaging... you're a fantastic writer. The whole "forbidden past" thing is a bit confusing... I mean, who's Stanger... Seaver or Stanger? I'm a little confused, but oh well. Sa must be Sam... but I'm confused about that too. As for the real Sam and Stanger (which is the most awesome name ever invented, btw)... can we say incest? But you do it in a way that almost makes it mysterious... engaging... i love it. Update soon!
very, very engaging... you're a fantastic writer. The whole "forbidden past" thing is a bit confusing... I mean, who's Stanger... Seaver or Stanger? I'm a little confused, but oh well. Sa must be Sam... but I'm confused about that too. As for the real Sam and Stanger (which is the most awesome name ever invented, btw)... can we say incest? But you do it in a way that almost makes it mysterious... engaging... i love it. Update soon!
12/28/2003 c1 I-Wuv-Muffins
*blushes* sorry about the last review... O_o I like this story! please continue! *hugs takendeath* Pweeze?
*blushes* sorry about the last review... O_o I like this story! please continue! *hugs takendeath* Pweeze?
11/23/2003 c47 I-Wuv-Muffins
Wow... This story is beginning to scare me... such bitter emotions... O_O And the incest is chilling to me.(Not in a way that I'm like disgusted, it is just rather creepy) It effects me. But nonetheless, wonderful writing ^-^. I really don't think I'm half as good as you... Bleh. Thanks for reviewing my story tho! Yours is pretty awesome. Update soon!
Wow... This story is beginning to scare me... such bitter emotions... O_O And the incest is chilling to me.(Not in a way that I'm like disgusted, it is just rather creepy) It effects me. But nonetheless, wonderful writing ^-^. I really don't think I'm half as good as you... Bleh. Thanks for reviewing my story tho! Yours is pretty awesome. Update soon!
11/15/2003 c47 11DreamNightmare
aww! poor sa! *tear* i wanna no more woman! lol update soon ^-^ lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmareaww! poor sa! *tear* i wanna no more woman! lol update soon ^-^ lylas late
DreamNightmare
11/13/2003 c46 1PunxRokrChix
omg this was so great! im 1 of sams friends n she told me bout this but i didnt no it was gonna b this amazin! please please PLEASE rite more!
PunxRokrChix
1PunxRokrChixomg this was so great! im 1 of sams friends n she told me bout this but i didnt no it was gonna b this amazin! please please PLEASE rite more!
PunxRokrChix
11/2/2003 c46 11DreamNightmare
lmao! ur talkin bout me damnit hehe...but u finally rote 1! haha! lol nice chapter...n c this is like cruel intentions since theyre supposed 2 b "bro n sis"...lol great job lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarelmao! ur talkin bout me damnit hehe...but u finally rote 1! haha! lol nice chapter...n c this is like cruel intentions since theyre supposed 2 b "bro n sis"...lol great job lylas late
DreamNightmare
10/31/2003 c5 6Kali Electra
good so far...just try to make new paragraphs when some one is speaking(in chapter 5), it would be a lot easier to read. the dialouge is good, but I noticed a few places where you could combine simple sentences and they would be much more effective. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this, keep writing!
~kali~
6Kali Electragood so far...just try to make new paragraphs when some one is speaking(in chapter 5), it would be a lot easier to read. the dialouge is good, but I noticed a few places where you could combine simple sentences and they would be much more effective. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this, keep writing!
~kali~
10/29/2003 c12 7all-a-birds-grace
Hello, I’m 14 and I think I’m mature for my age also, other people all loud and some even smoking (ew, GROSS!). Anyway, I’m 5’ 6” and have dark brown hair a few inches down from my shoulders, and have very dark brown eyes.
7all-a-birds-graceHello, I’m 14 and I think I’m mature for my age also, other people all loud and some even smoking (ew, GROSS!). Anyway, I’m 5’ 6” and have dark brown hair a few inches down from my shoulders, and have very dark brown eyes.