for Iniquity10/1/2007 c2 
28Erisah Mae
Cold.
But well constructed- nice work on maintaining the tension throughout this piece, and the suspenseful ending was very nicely done.
I like it.
Erisah
28Erisah MaeCold.
But well constructed- nice work on maintaining the tension throughout this piece, and the suspenseful ending was very nicely done.
I like it.
Erisah
5/23/2004 c2 11cashew
Wow...that left me speechless. Which, as anyone who knows me will tell you, is quite a feat. Absolutely beautiful, there is no other way to describe this. I know that I saw the words 'the end' at the end of this...and I also know that it was posted back in August...but if you would go on with it I would love you forever. Did I mention it's my birthday? Lol, well, alright, my b-day was earlier in the week...but still, you really need to go on with this as it rocks my socks. Wonderful job!
11cashewWow...that left me speechless. Which, as anyone who knows me will tell you, is quite a feat. Absolutely beautiful, there is no other way to describe this. I know that I saw the words 'the end' at the end of this...and I also know that it was posted back in August...but if you would go on with it I would love you forever. Did I mention it's my birthday? Lol, well, alright, my b-day was earlier in the week...but still, you really need to go on with this as it rocks my socks. Wonderful job!