for BloodStreaked12/13/2010 c20 RyomaPaola
Gah! Do you know how AMAZING this story is? I absolutely LOVED it. There are a few grammatical errors in each chapter, a few sentences/phrases with the wrong punctuation marks and a few sentences that seem to be cut, though. But honestly, I fell in love with Ms. Pierce. Gah, I love her surname-before she married Cole. I applaud you for this amazing story. I only wish to see Anita's story, not as a sideliner, but as a whole one.:)
Gah! Do you know how AMAZING this story is? I absolutely LOVED it. There are a few grammatical errors in each chapter, a few sentences/phrases with the wrong punctuation marks and a few sentences that seem to be cut, though. But honestly, I fell in love with Ms. Pierce. Gah, I love her surname-before she married Cole. I applaud you for this amazing story. I only wish to see Anita's story, not as a sideliner, but as a whole one.:)
9/23/2010 c19 Last Wish
I'm a sucker for happy endings and you gave me just that. The story was thoroughly exciting and cute at the same time. Definite favorite for me now :)
I'm a sucker for happy endings and you gave me just that. The story was thoroughly exciting and cute at the same time. Definite favorite for me now :)
7/5/2010 c19 witeaya
a really interestingly amazing story!
who doesnt love romantic-action-well-written story?
at some point i started to believe that barbara will eventually be the one who will kill danny. but i never suspected nial to be that sick bas.tard not until dylan and cole found him at the surveillance room. it's kinda suspicious how only him was there.
a really interestingly amazing story!
who doesnt love romantic-action-well-written story?
at some point i started to believe that barbara will eventually be the one who will kill danny. but i never suspected nial to be that sick bas.tard not until dylan and cole found him at the surveillance room. it's kinda suspicious how only him was there.
7/4/2010 c19 
21rosieroo
holy wow! that was an AMAZING story! i loved the storyline and the detail you put into it was awesome. you've done a VERY good job at creating a unique story with equally unique and interesting characters.
the twist was great as well! i suspected for a while that danny was one of the characters but then i dismissed it (and i had no idea it would be nial). so you completely surprised me!
21rosierooholy wow! that was an AMAZING story! i loved the storyline and the detail you put into it was awesome. you've done a VERY good job at creating a unique story with equally unique and interesting characters.
the twist was great as well! i suspected for a while that danny was one of the characters but then i dismissed it (and i had no idea it would be nial). so you completely surprised me!
9/7/2009 c19 2bubublacz
Nice! But wait, I don't understand I thought that Lila's mom was alive, I remember you distinctly saying that something, something to your daughter? Right? I hope that you really finished that, I mean made her mom reappear and also for the fact that I don't know what her real name is. So yeah... I guess that's it.
And oh yeah, before I found out about Nial, I thought that he and Anita would make a good couple too, if she and D won't make a hit.
And by the way, I really like your story, because you showed a girl who could kick ass, a psychotic killer (which was so cool) and that fiery, passionate-y love/romance/lust/sex that you've written down. I was rapt.
2bubublaczNice! But wait, I don't understand I thought that Lila's mom was alive, I remember you distinctly saying that something, something to your daughter? Right? I hope that you really finished that, I mean made her mom reappear and also for the fact that I don't know what her real name is. So yeah... I guess that's it.
And oh yeah, before I found out about Nial, I thought that he and Anita would make a good couple too, if she and D won't make a hit.
And by the way, I really like your story, because you showed a girl who could kick ass, a psychotic killer (which was so cool) and that fiery, passionate-y love/romance/lust/sex that you've written down. I was rapt.
9/6/2009 c1 bubublacz
OH my G! I can't help but squeal! I've been searching for stories like these, the ones with strong female heroine! and assassin types too! Gahh! I'm excited I hope that this'll be good!
OH my G! I can't help but squeal! I've been searching for stories like these, the ones with strong female heroine! and assassin types too! Gahh! I'm excited I hope that this'll be good!
4/23/2009 c20 Elmo'z BFF
finally finished it! awesomeness
n tears of blood looks interestn. but is it jst me, or did it say somewhere that the guy was dead for 8 years and counting, but one of his 'mistresses' are pregnant and is due in 4 months? did u mean that the dude has been dead 4 for 8 months? but i dnt c how that wud work eitha...?
finally finished it! awesomeness
n tears of blood looks interestn. but is it jst me, or did it say somewhere that the guy was dead for 8 years and counting, but one of his 'mistresses' are pregnant and is due in 4 months? did u mean that the dude has been dead 4 for 8 months? but i dnt c how that wud work eitha...?
4/22/2009 c17 Elmo'z BFF
holy shit!
Nial? well damn. who wud hav expected it?
good bloodi job :D
holy shit!
Nial? well damn. who wud hav expected it?
good bloodi job :D
4/21/2009 c4 Zainab
story is pretty great so far. n i like cole. but for some reason, i dont like lila'z charachter. she sounds too heartless...?
story is pretty great so far. n i like cole. but for some reason, i dont like lila'z charachter. she sounds too heartless...?
4/21/2009 c1 Elmo'z BFF
whoa. wat a start. cant wait to finish it!
whoa. wat a start. cant wait to finish it!