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9/18/2003 c1 Dakotaqt
hey Ryokodikidok!

love it! great work for only being in *6th* grade! show us what you can do now! =D
9/12/2003 c1 1The baava Project
Hello, Ryoko! ^_^

For an early work, as you put it, this was very interesting; and aptly named. I actually enjoyed it quite a bit . . . I think it shows enough writing talent that if you ever choose to, it would benefit from an older perspective rewrite. I mean, going back over it and fixing it up even better. ^_^ (for example, switching up the sentence structure a little). But honestly, this was very well written, and I hope you'll get your 30+ reviews (lol) to add more to it!

ja ne,

LoK

P.S. Thank you so much for reviewing my story! Now, all you readers out there, review this! ^_~

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