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8/27/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
Beautiful.. I liked it too..

MMh, the repetition was great.. It added to the balance as well as helped emphasized the point..

Oh yes, the way you strung the words together were great too.. Seem half melodious and yet in a way, quite dark..

Loved it, the whole flow and general theme of the piece was wonderful..

Somehow you just have a way with words, to twist them in such a way..

Awesome piece, good job..

~Shadafakup

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