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9/29/2003 c1 warnthepenguins
Pretty good stuff. The only problem I see is a tendency to misuse words-for example, you said "strutted" when you meant "strode," and "mingled" when you meant "lingered."

Not done yet!
9/14/2003 c3 9Celeste Se'oir
Neat,battles, gotta love 'em. Your so good, I like your style. Too bad mine sucks. Keep writing!
9/14/2003 c2 Celeste Se'oir
I'm your only reviewer,sniff, that's so sad your really good. Well then I'll just have to keep reveiwing then huh?
8/14/2003 c1 Celeste Se'oir
Quite interesting, nice graphic details

maybe I could learn something from you

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