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9/18/2004 c2 1FamousOneLiners
I like this, its pretty good, just make the chapters a bit longer.
10/13/2003 c2 2LaserStrike
wow your fic is so...evil!

I don't relly know wat to say...uh...update son!
8/19/2003 c2 firess
hes a big meanie.
8/19/2003 c2 6Confused Writer
awesome! i'd write more but i have no time! update please! james is creepy...
8/17/2003 c1 SurfingAngel
Thanks for the great review of my little dance story, I really appreciate it. About the paragraphs, I write them all tabbed but when it comes through to the site some of them end up all bunched up for some reason. If you know why, let me know and I'll fix it 'cause I know how annoying it is. I really liked the begginning of this story, keep up the great work!
8/15/2003 c1 Fei
Eck... he reminds me of my... friends boyfriend. Only they're worse. They go to the toilet together, shower together, live together, it's scary. I don't know how she can stand it...

Anyway, nice start. It's actually vey realistic, I'd love to see more.
8/14/2003 c1 2oh what now
Hmm.. interesting start. I'm into these type of stories. A couple of spelling mistakes. And you hoped it wasn't a short chapter eh? Lol. Yeah it was, update soon. I like you're story! Bye.

DJ

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