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8/20/2003 c1 89Crucified Sanctity
I liked it alot =D Especially the end in connection to the lullaby theme... Occasionally the rhyming sounds forced for example "I wish so very much for you and your life

The wound you carry from such a big knife"

Yah. But apart from the slightly forced sections its great!

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