10/18/2004 c1 7Yemaya
This is better then Demons. It has a sense of almost insanity to it, as f your really crawling around in someone else's head. It makes the characters seem more realistic, thats what I think anyway. Are you going to do anything with it? I still think you have a Stephen King style, thats ok he can write good stuff, but it's all got the same theme and the same characters. It's good that you don't stick to horror.

9/4/2003 c1 1Lyd
Wow. I liked it a lot. You did a good job of separating your story from other ones I have read about people who have been changed by science/a lab somewhere. Good job!