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8/15/2003 c1 89Crucified Sanctity
I didn't mean to hurt you . It wasn't you who started the bad things it was my whole day. I'm sorry .

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8/15/2003 c1 98ShadowGal
Gorgeous. Great emotions, wonderful style. My only complaint is that I don't think the "The air was cold last night too" needs the 'too' at the end. It would sound a lot better without it, and the 'too' in the next line would be stronger. Otherwise, nice job.

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