for Rainy Nights10/15/2003 c1 
30Ruana
its a good start. are you gonna write more or was it just a piece of writing from your head?
30Ruanaits a good start. are you gonna write more or was it just a piece of writing from your head?
10/12/2003 c1 18Last-Chael
Rain is very inspirational, however, usually in the depressing way! although, I'm highly partial to rainy nights, they are so calming and soothing for me.
You do have a great deal of potential, and writing is an excellent way to express yourself and to reveal the true you. However, I would really like to see some more optimistic work from you, There are many beautiful things out there, and if that doesn't work, fantasy is always good! Keep the creativity flowing ^_^ Can't wait to read more!
Take Care
~Chael~
18Last-ChaelRain is very inspirational, however, usually in the depressing way! although, I'm highly partial to rainy nights, they are so calming and soothing for me.
You do have a great deal of potential, and writing is an excellent way to express yourself and to reveal the true you. However, I would really like to see some more optimistic work from you, There are many beautiful things out there, and if that doesn't work, fantasy is always good! Keep the creativity flowing ^_^ Can't wait to read more!
Take Care
~Chael~
8/18/2003 c1 Kezarahk
Brief, bittersweet (almost more sweet than bitter), and just as long as it needs to be.
Brief, bittersweet (almost more sweet than bitter), and just as long as it needs to be.
8/15/2003 c1 12crucify my sanity
"perhaps its the colour of the sun cut flat and coverin'
the crossroads i'm standin' at
or maybe it's the weather or something like that
but mama you been on my mind"
hmm. you have potential as a writer, the poetic focus of your thoughts but you need to move on from this stuff. its not worth it and you need to let your mind explore whats really there, in the world and existing.
12crucify my sanity"perhaps its the colour of the sun cut flat and coverin'
the crossroads i'm standin' at
or maybe it's the weather or something like that
but mama you been on my mind"
hmm. you have potential as a writer, the poetic focus of your thoughts but you need to move on from this stuff. its not worth it and you need to let your mind explore whats really there, in the world and existing.