for Scorched Milk4/19/2007 c1 
2symbiotic
Ok I'd like to see how much you really know about thrash metal and the thrash scene. I mean this is good don't get me wrong but I just want to know how much you do know about it.
2symbioticOk I'd like to see how much you really know about thrash metal and the thrash scene. I mean this is good don't get me wrong but I just want to know how much you do know about it.
3/26/2007 c6 12Evan Reality Defiant
Very solid work. I enjoyed reading this very much. I didn't have time to make it to the last chapter, but I'll get there soon enough. This is absolutely wonderful.
12Evan Reality DefiantVery solid work. I enjoyed reading this very much. I didn't have time to make it to the last chapter, but I'll get there soon enough. This is absolutely wonderful.
7/15/2005 c7 Mock My Wonderland
I like your story alot but in the begining it seemed like there was a little to much dialouge (sp?) but I can't even say if it's still like that. Your story rocks and I put it on my 'favorite stories' list thing. I hope you don't mind!
I like your story alot but in the begining it seemed like there was a little to much dialouge (sp?) but I can't even say if it's still like that. Your story rocks and I put it on my 'favorite stories' list thing. I hope you don't mind!
11/3/2004 c7 8Kazza2085
Hehehe Good story I like it... SO I take it from the whole lack of updating since 2003 this story isn't continuing? Realy bugger that!
8Kazza2085Hehehe Good story I like it... SO I take it from the whole lack of updating since 2003 this story isn't continuing? Realy bugger that!
1/4/2004 c2 mystery woman
I would personally like to object to the persistant inter-character molestations. If they continue in that fasion all of them will require chiropractors by the fourth chapter.
I would personally like to object to the persistant inter-character molestations. If they continue in that fasion all of them will require chiropractors by the fourth chapter.
1/4/2004 c1 mystery woman
Your descriptions are wonderful
your story lacks pace
your dialogue occasionally gives it that and occasionally tries to hard to give it that-it becomes unrealistic. also everyone talks the same and there is a common thread of understanding between the band members in terms of abstractions that doesnt translate the the audience. let us in more.
Your descriptions are wonderful
your story lacks pace
your dialogue occasionally gives it that and occasionally tries to hard to give it that-it becomes unrealistic. also everyone talks the same and there is a common thread of understanding between the band members in terms of abstractions that doesnt translate the the audience. let us in more.
12/16/2003 c7 8Grunge Muffin
*blushes* an avid reader of mine? well now I'm an avid reader of yours. I really like this story. And BTW, cool pen name. That was an awesome movie. Totally mind blowing.
8Grunge Muffin*blushes* an avid reader of mine? well now I'm an avid reader of yours. I really like this story. And BTW, cool pen name. That was an awesome movie. Totally mind blowing.
12/2/2003 c6 Grunge Muffin
Finished! I like it. All your characters are different and original. I hope you update soon
Finished! I like it. All your characters are different and original. I hope you update soon
12/2/2003 c1 Grunge Muffin
I like it! it's cool. You write well - your story flows. Why scorched milk though? It is a cool name for a band, I'll agree with that. anyway, I just wanted to let you know I thought this chapter was cool before I read the rest!
I like it! it's cool. You write well - your story flows. Why scorched milk though? It is a cool name for a band, I'll agree with that. anyway, I just wanted to let you know I thought this chapter was cool before I read the rest!
9/27/2003 c6 lisa
luvin it- keep goin
luvin it- keep goin
9/27/2003 c6 lisa
luvin it- keep goin
luvin it- keep goin
9/4/2003 c5 newnoise
Hey just wanted to let you know I'm loving the story so far, keep it up!
Hey just wanted to let you know I'm loving the story so far, keep it up!
8/27/2003 c4 16Mannie
that was good, but i was wondering...do you always reward your reviews with pastries. Im not putting it down im just saying, I believe in positive reinforcement.
write on...
16Manniethat was good, but i was wondering...do you always reward your reviews with pastries. Im not putting it down im just saying, I believe in positive reinforcement.
write on...
8/25/2003 c4 9Minnie Souris
hey! i really like this. like your style, and good content. eternal damnation on all those who read and don't review in return. putting this on my favourites list so i wont miss it again & i promise to review every chapter.
9Minnie Sourishey! i really like this. like your style, and good content. eternal damnation on all those who read and don't review in return. putting this on my favourites list so i wont miss it again & i promise to review every chapter.
8/17/2003 c2 MCM315
This is a very well-written story! I like it so far. The character development is good and it's an interesting plot. I love band stories!Keep writing!
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This is a very well-written story! I like it so far. The character development is good and it's an interesting plot. I love band stories!Keep writing!
You currently can't accept anonymous reviews. If you turn that off, you'll probably get some more :)