for Slave, i became11/12/2003 c1 
24Lux's Confusion
i absolutly love this portrayal of depression, cause it speaks so clearly to me of my past as one in the dark. this desparate sturggle to obtain a lasting peace broken by the dark of your mind. abandoned, shamed, and lost to what you once were. so perfect, my god. great job as always.
-Jasmine-
24Lux's Confusioni absolutly love this portrayal of depression, cause it speaks so clearly to me of my past as one in the dark. this desparate sturggle to obtain a lasting peace broken by the dark of your mind. abandoned, shamed, and lost to what you once were. so perfect, my god. great job as always.
-Jasmine-
9/13/2003 c1 4Ethelflaed
(blinks) Very haunting. You rhymed, I'm happy. I don't like free verse . . . Heh. You forgot to capitilize and put spaces a few times, but other than that, it was quite wonderful.
4Ethelflaed(blinks) Very haunting. You rhymed, I'm happy. I don't like free verse . . . Heh. You forgot to capitilize and put spaces a few times, but other than that, it was quite wonderful.
8/27/2003 c1 10Hikarineko Skadi
Hell yah this is a kick ass poem don't let anyone tell you your a bad writter. A fan.
Kari
10Hikarineko SkadiHell yah this is a kick ass poem don't let anyone tell you your a bad writter. A fan.
Kari