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54Werecat99
I stand speechless. This is quite amazing, with very original metaphors and expressions.
I loved it, of course.
54Werecat99I stand speechless. This is quite amazing, with very original metaphors and expressions.
I loved it, of course.
1/26/2004 c1 38ittybittytreefrog
Heehee. A Harry Potter romance poem. Sounds like something Ginny would write. Er... Only better. Um, never mind. Nice poem.
38ittybittytreefrogHeehee. A Harry Potter romance poem. Sounds like something Ginny would write. Er... Only better. Um, never mind. Nice poem.
1/1/2004 c1 173Dancinggal5389
You seriously have an incredible way with words. They sound absolutely breathtaking. By the way, I'm HP-obsessed too!
173Dancinggal5389You seriously have an incredible way with words. They sound absolutely breathtaking. By the way, I'm HP-obsessed too!
10/21/2003 c1 16Bohemian Muse
Only a true HP fan can appreciate this poem. (And being a Dan Radcliffe lover doesn't hurt, either.) I love the wording. Something about it screams passion and lust and love and yearning and dreaming and recieving. It's amazing. Keep up the good work.
16Bohemian MuseOnly a true HP fan can appreciate this poem. (And being a Dan Radcliffe lover doesn't hurt, either.) I love the wording. Something about it screams passion and lust and love and yearning and dreaming and recieving. It's amazing. Keep up the good work.
9/20/2003 c1 9RaeneofFaeries
That was deep, yeah. I like 'til dawn unoods it's light' a lot, really cool imagery
9RaeneofFaeriesThat was deep, yeah. I like 'til dawn unoods it's light' a lot, really cool imagery
9/16/2003 c1 37handle187
Kinda wordy, but I get the point. A good girl always goes for the bad boy. However did you mean to rhyme "idle" with "kindle" cuz they don't really rhyme.
37handle187Kinda wordy, but I get the point. A good girl always goes for the bad boy. However did you mean to rhyme "idle" with "kindle" cuz they don't really rhyme.
9/13/2003 c1 53Jupiter's Tears
I love this poem. It's so beautifully written! You have an amazing way with words that I don't come by very often. So I want to thank you for posting your works on fp.net!
53Jupiter's TearsI love this poem. It's so beautifully written! You have an amazing way with words that I don't come by very often. So I want to thank you for posting your works on fp.net!
9/9/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
This is...just amazing! There is absolutely your best piece yet! It's so brilliant that I'm tempted to add this into my fav. list, and I think I will too.
36Psycho-kyugurlThis is...just amazing! There is absolutely your best piece yet! It's so brilliant that I'm tempted to add this into my fav. list, and I think I will too.
9/7/2003 c1 53Artemis Astralstar
Beautiful, im writing a fic at the moment, and this rings very true. well written, well doine, keep it up.
53Artemis AstralstarBeautiful, im writing a fic at the moment, and this rings very true. well written, well doine, keep it up.
9/2/2003 c1 35Mime
Wow...that was definately one the of best love poems I have EVER read on this site. Great job! I'm adding you and this piece to my fav. authors/stories list.
Also, a couple of FP poets and myself have gathered to organize a search for FP writer Princess Mulan, who seems to have disappeared sometime this past May. We are writing and auctioning poems towards the search. With the auctioned money, we hope to hire a private investigator. To read more about the search, you can visit: Http:/w.helpfindprincessmulan.0catch.com. Your help will be greatly appreciated!
35MimeWow...that was definately one the of best love poems I have EVER read on this site. Great job! I'm adding you and this piece to my fav. authors/stories list.
Also, a couple of FP poets and myself have gathered to organize a search for FP writer Princess Mulan, who seems to have disappeared sometime this past May. We are writing and auctioning poems towards the search. With the auctioned money, we hope to hire a private investigator. To read more about the search, you can visit: Http:/w.helpfindprincessmulan.0catch.com. Your help will be greatly appreciated!