for When Lilies Bleed11/13/2010 c2 
17Chinagirl18
Omygosh! I love the story! I hope you have finished the story and is just waiting for someone to comment. Then you will post every chapter after that. I'm that person! I wanna read the rest!
Great job! Please finish the story! It is very well written! Their friendship is so rare. Please add! :D
17Chinagirl18Omygosh! I love the story! I hope you have finished the story and is just waiting for someone to comment. Then you will post every chapter after that. I'm that person! I wanna read the rest!
Great job! Please finish the story! It is very well written! Their friendship is so rare. Please add! :D
11/13/2010 c1 Chinagirl18
I loved the kiss on the forehead at the end! That was so cute! I'm reading more!
I loved the kiss on the forehead at the end! That was so cute! I'm reading more!
6/3/2004 c2 2philoslove
You're not going to continue it? you haven't been! :( oh well, it was an interesting read. continue writing, mate!
2philosloveYou're not going to continue it? you haven't been! :( oh well, it was an interesting read. continue writing, mate!
5/16/2004 c2 53midnight soul
wow this story has it all.. romance, tragedy, everything... please continue it soon! I'm pretty much addicted to your story now, so please don't leave me hanging, keep on writing!
53midnight soulwow this story has it all.. romance, tragedy, everything... please continue it soon! I'm pretty much addicted to your story now, so please don't leave me hanging, keep on writing!
5/16/2004 c1 13Twizzlers
Well, I just looked at your profile and saw that you discontinued this, which I can't belive because it was really good. But, I know what you mean about not being able to finish things. I barely finish anything I start to write. Anyway, after I left you that other review, I thought about it and realized that your story reminds me of the one I'm currently repairing. So, if you get a chance, check mine out and let me know if you think it's over done or not, cause sometimes I feel like it is, ya know? Anyway, I still really like the way you write and I'll check out any new stuff you post. Later. Twizz
13TwizzlersWell, I just looked at your profile and saw that you discontinued this, which I can't belive because it was really good. But, I know what you mean about not being able to finish things. I barely finish anything I start to write. Anyway, after I left you that other review, I thought about it and realized that your story reminds me of the one I'm currently repairing. So, if you get a chance, check mine out and let me know if you think it's over done or not, cause sometimes I feel like it is, ya know? Anyway, I still really like the way you write and I'll check out any new stuff you post. Later. Twizz
5/16/2004 c2 Twizzlers
Wow, I really like this! It was excellent. I first read the description and thought it was going to be pretty over done, but I decided to read it anyways because lilies are my favorite flower and lily is my favorite name and it was in your title. But this was really good. I really like Freddie's character, he's really different. Awesome job. I'll be chacking back. Twizz
Wow, I really like this! It was excellent. I first read the description and thought it was going to be pretty over done, but I decided to read it anyways because lilies are my favorite flower and lily is my favorite name and it was in your title. But this was really good. I really like Freddie's character, he's really different. Awesome job. I'll be chacking back. Twizz
5/4/2004 c1 wastedsodapop
Wow! that was amazing, it fits so well together, write more, i want to find out what happens, it has huge potential if you have a good idea, don't ruin it, but you are a fantastic writer and i shall be adding you to my favourite authors list..well done, it's awesome
Wow! that was amazing, it fits so well together, write more, i want to find out what happens, it has huge potential if you have a good idea, don't ruin it, but you are a fantastic writer and i shall be adding you to my favourite authors list..well done, it's awesome
2/26/2004 c2 13PadfootsPaws
Aww i feel so sorry for her. hopefully things go better now that she's with Freddie. Write more.
~Demon-Blue015
13PadfootsPawsAww i feel so sorry for her. hopefully things go better now that she's with Freddie. Write more.
~Demon-Blue015
2/9/2004 c2 4Fuuga Kumi
Wow... poor Mariah... yay for Freddie ^^ I want to read more, i hope those two become closer?
4Fuuga KumiWow... poor Mariah... yay for Freddie ^^ I want to read more, i hope those two become closer?
2/5/2004 c2 PurityUntouched
Is that it? It just ends...like that? How can you end it like that? Add more, please! The rest of it's great, awesome content and everything. You really connect everything in a way that makes sense...except for the end...gah.
Is that it? It just ends...like that? How can you end it like that? Add more, please! The rest of it's great, awesome content and everything. You really connect everything in a way that makes sense...except for the end...gah.
1/24/2004 c2 5SorchaMacArthur
please write more. I was wondering, does Freddie's father have anything to do with Mariah's *condition*? Sorry, what i meant was when she left 4 months ago, did she ever have get paid by Freddie's father? i was wondering cuz he died of cancer and the burn on her arm. Anyways, keep writing!
5SorchaMacArthurplease write more. I was wondering, does Freddie's father have anything to do with Mariah's *condition*? Sorry, what i meant was when she left 4 months ago, did she ever have get paid by Freddie's father? i was wondering cuz he died of cancer and the burn on her arm. Anyways, keep writing!
1/14/2004 c2 emily
hey write more! I want to know what happens!
hey write more! I want to know what happens!
1/2/2004 c2 Billie Frank
Please update soon! I'd like know how it ends. Please email me and let me know!
Billie
Please update soon! I'd like know how it ends. Please email me and let me know!
Billie