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5/31/2005 c1 24mepoindexter

Cheer up my dear.

"All you need is love"

- John Lennon

Smart man.

Shot in the back.

Very sad.



- Adam

(thanks for the review of end of a mind, honestly, it's not my favourite I have there. Try "prowler, Emerald glance, or gaze of insanity.)
11/12/2003 c1 24Lux's Confusion
what can come out of this poem but a sort of pity, for the character, and for the self. pity in a sense that you know that it isn't what this person wants, and at the same time the conviction seems to dash the only hope of salvation. i don't know, it kind of left me wanting something more then an utter conclusion such as this. but i guess that was the idea you were trying to get across, right? well in any sense you did a fine job with your words, thoughts and feelings.

8/27/2003 c1 10Hikarineko Skadi
I like this poem it sounds a little like me.

8/21/2003 c1 145dfgsfdghftgt44
That was a little harsh. I really hope you don't actually want to die. I mean, that would be so cruel to rob the world of your poetry. I think this is pretty good. Keep up the great work.

~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

P.S. Thanks for the review.
8/17/2003 c1 2the lacey lord
Great, It's a little to harsh for me, keep up the good work, you write good horror/fantasy poems.

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