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1/6/2012 c22 luckylucy
wow just...wow i have no words for this! its so amazing and inspiring i think it deserves to become a best-seller! xxx Sincerely, a very honest (and lucky ;) TO HAVE READ THIS) Lucy.
10/8/2011 c21 3Brightheart
such a cute story. love it.
12/3/2008 c21 Elf or Vixen
I absolutely love this story. it's now one of my favourites.

-SW
12/8/2006 c22 cityofdevils
wow.the "will u marry me" thing kinda caught me by surprise.
12/2/2005 c21 AubriannaKnight
awe...i loved it
12/2/2005 c14 AubriannaKnight
oh, Ash.. you poor dear ... stop being a stupid chicken shit and fess up tou your feelings...

other than that.. very funny and entertaining story... you are a talented writer.
12/2/2005 c11 AubriannaKnight
awesome story.. I love it so far and think it's very cute.. The only thing I have a prob with is Ash.. Her attidude problem is quiet old and starting to annoy me.. She might act like she doesn't want anyones sympathy, but she sure does play the pity me, I'm a tortured soul card enough. She's being way to stubborn and bitchy.. She's a senior and acting like a baby.
10/15/2005 c21 1Dirty Secret
What a sweet story! It's fabulous and I LOVE it! :)
9/2/2005 c9 Amused Fuck
Hi. I like this story, but Ash NEVER SAW THE MOVIES? That is SAD. Anywho, I had to get that off my chest ^_^. That sucks for Ash though. . . But she's pushing him away because of Stacey (which is weird) but I guess normal. I'll read the next chapters! ^_^
1/21/2005 c1 170redsage
is it me, or somehow we've met? coz Ashlyn sounded a bit like me... well almost.. and i'm kinda in the same situation.. being cold and sadistic.. trying to make myself invisible as possible.. and Dallas, he's same as my friend here.. although he may not have the same bad experience but he sure is as optimistic and persistent as Dallas.. and the same love story is happening here.. im cold while his willing to make this ice queen into a, a... spring fairy? shoot. i dont know. sorry about that.. to make this damn review complete. i love it and there's nothing more to say.
1/2/2005 c22 virgo-valentina
This story is the sweetest story I have ever read. Dallas is so adorable and Ashlyn is such a completely unique character.
11/23/2004 c22 8DidntCryOnce
Although the ending was kind of abrupt, overall the story was really good. I've read a couple of your stories, actually, and I've come to the conclusion that you're a fabulous writer. Continue on with your lovely words, please.

-Stephani
11/15/2004 c22 4Morgan Davis
aww this story was so cute! i really really loved it! i think you are a great writer, i'm probly going to read some of your other stuff now too!
11/7/2004 c22 Aarthi
Hi T.Riddle,
This is the most beautiful story that I've ever read. I started reading it from Chapter-1, 3 and a half hours ago and have finally finished reading. You are amazing..That's all I've to say.
11/7/2004 c21 1rukki
sniffles. THis is really good. wow. It is a coming of age story that touches all aspects of being a teenager. Well written.
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