for Close My Eyes10/1/2003 c8 The Lady Effie
GAH! I hate cliffhangers. rawr. I wanna know what happens. this is so awesome. update quickly PLEASE!
GAH! I hate cliffhangers. rawr. I wanna know what happens. this is so awesome. update quickly PLEASE!
9/30/2003 c8 Neko-Girl-Spce
Interesting. This Stacey girl has come into the picture. Uh oh. What's going to happen! I sense something bad.
I can't believe Daphne could be so snobby. Well...acutally I can. So update soon!
Interesting. This Stacey girl has come into the picture. Uh oh. What's going to happen! I sense something bad.
I can't believe Daphne could be so snobby. Well...acutally I can. So update soon!
9/29/2003 c7 Catlynizdabomb
O! I liked it! Very much! Ash is cool and Dallas. I want more Dallas! Your talent is amazing. Keep on writing girl~!
O! I liked it! Very much! Ash is cool and Dallas. I want more Dallas! Your talent is amazing. Keep on writing girl~!
9/23/2003 c7 Neko-Girl-Spce
Nice Chapter. It's nice to see more of Ash's life. Now if only we could see more of Dallas's life. Hehe.
3rd Rock from the Sun is a hilarious show btw.
Nice Chapter. It's nice to see more of Ash's life. Now if only we could see more of Dallas's life. Hehe.
3rd Rock from the Sun is a hilarious show btw.
9/23/2003 c7 Wolvierine
Yay! She's staying! :) That's a good thing. I can't wait for the next chapter! What can happen next, I wonder!
Yay! She's staying! :) That's a good thing. I can't wait for the next chapter! What can happen next, I wonder!
9/22/2003 c7 
5DayDreamer731
Yay! She's staying! I knew her mother couldn't make her no matter how evil she is! Then I'm kinda disappointed she didn't get to see where Dallas lived. Sry but i gotta make this review short. It was a really great chapter and I'm so relieved that she doesn't have to move in. I'm also p'oed at her mom cuz she has no clue about anything. I swear she's a really bad parent. Anyway great chapter! ttyl!
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5DayDreamer731Yay! She's staying! I knew her mother couldn't make her no matter how evil she is! Then I'm kinda disappointed she didn't get to see where Dallas lived. Sry but i gotta make this review short. It was a really great chapter and I'm so relieved that she doesn't have to move in. I'm also p'oed at her mom cuz she has no clue about anything. I swear she's a really bad parent. Anyway great chapter! ttyl!
!~*CherryTrio731*~!
9/22/2003 c7 6Tragedy is Love
hey, i like this story! i read your other one 'words i feel' and that was great! i am looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.
6Tragedy is Lovehey, i like this story! i read your other one 'words i feel' and that was great! i am looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.
9/21/2003 c7 6daisycakes
ah woho i liked this chapter! bob seems really cool :) i hope things work out for her! yay! update soon! i really really like this story! i think it flows nicely. lol ash's sarcasm is very wicked and sly. hehe, ok byebye!
6daisycakesah woho i liked this chapter! bob seems really cool :) i hope things work out for her! yay! update soon! i really really like this story! i think it flows nicely. lol ash's sarcasm is very wicked and sly. hehe, ok byebye!
9/21/2003 c3 daisycakes
ah i love the part where dallas gets all embarassed! that was so cute! :D
yes, and i would be very scared if suddenly people are stalking me and finding out my locker combinations and such.. what type of "weird" stuff is ash into? like, what sorts of superstitious stuff? anyway, back to reading :D
ah i love the part where dallas gets all embarassed! that was so cute! :D
yes, and i would be very scared if suddenly people are stalking me and finding out my locker combinations and such.. what type of "weird" stuff is ash into? like, what sorts of superstitious stuff? anyway, back to reading :D
9/21/2003 c2 daisycakes
hullo hullo! It's very interesting so far :) I love the name Dallas Seattle Trenton. HAHAHH it made me crack up :)
hullo hullo! It's very interesting so far :) I love the name Dallas Seattle Trenton. HAHAHH it made me crack up :)
9/21/2003 c7 13The Lady Effie
yay! she's staying! i'm so excited! YAY FOR LOTR-NESS! this was an awesome chapter! please update soon!
13The Lady Effieyay! she's staying! i'm so excited! YAY FOR LOTR-NESS! this was an awesome chapter! please update soon!
9/14/2003 c6 Wolvierine
AW. Ash's evil mother cut it short. I wish Ash and Dallas had more time together. Not fair! WEll waiting for the next update.
AW. Ash's evil mother cut it short. I wish Ash and Dallas had more time together. Not fair! WEll waiting for the next update.
9/14/2003 c6 Neko-Girl-Spce
Nice chapter! Ash's mom does sound really mean. So I'm guessing the next chapter will focus around Ash's problems with her mom, right?
Well I can't wait for more, so hurry up. I really want to find out more about Dallas too!
Nice chapter! Ash's mom does sound really mean. So I'm guessing the next chapter will focus around Ash's problems with her mom, right?
Well I can't wait for more, so hurry up. I really want to find out more about Dallas too!
9/13/2003 c6 slinkster sunshine
hmm.. that dallas fellow is such a mystery. oh well, you have me completely hooked! the drama, the romance, the intrigue..
[trinculo]: they live in a boring old town, you sod! what's so exciting about that?
i dunno.. perhaps because i can relate. anyhow, i really enjoyed reading this. the characters and situations are very realistic, and you're writing style is simple, unique, and.. SUPURB. =^.^=
i'll be checking for the next chapter, but i promise not to harass you for an update. i know how those can be.. @_@
you rock my face off, so thanks again!
::runs off like the freak she is::
hmm.. that dallas fellow is such a mystery. oh well, you have me completely hooked! the drama, the romance, the intrigue..
[trinculo]: they live in a boring old town, you sod! what's so exciting about that?
i dunno.. perhaps because i can relate. anyhow, i really enjoyed reading this. the characters and situations are very realistic, and you're writing style is simple, unique, and.. SUPURB. =^.^=
i'll be checking for the next chapter, but i promise not to harass you for an update. i know how those can be.. @_@
you rock my face off, so thanks again!
::runs off like the freak she is::
9/13/2003 c6 The Lady Effie
this is seriously one of the best stories i have ever read! update PLEASE! i love how all the characters have a personality. that sounds kinda weird, but i hate stories where everything is either the main character or boring. good job. heh. this is most definetly going on my favorites!
this is seriously one of the best stories i have ever read! update PLEASE! i love how all the characters have a personality. that sounds kinda weird, but i hate stories where everything is either the main character or boring. good job. heh. this is most definetly going on my favorites!