for Close My Eyes8/18/2003 c2 Wolvierine
O. Is Dallas the love interest? I'm guessing that. They just met and everything, but I think that he likes her. But I'll just have to wait to find out.
O. Is Dallas the love interest? I'm guessing that. They just met and everything, but I think that he likes her. But I'll just have to wait to find out.
8/17/2003 c1 Wolvierine
OOH! Nice start! I can tell that Ashlyn feels bored in her town... WEll I can't wait to see what you write next.
OOH! Nice start! I can tell that Ashlyn feels bored in her town... WEll I can't wait to see what you write next.
8/17/2003 c1 
57NeWriter
Good start- ou described her attitude very well. But how can the teacher not say anything to her comment about the passage making her sleep? Lol. I wouldn´t have tolerated it! Anyway, keep writing... it looks interesting =P.
57NeWriterGood start- ou described her attitude very well. But how can the teacher not say anything to her comment about the passage making her sleep? Lol. I wouldn´t have tolerated it! Anyway, keep writing... it looks interesting =P.
8/17/2003 c1 171Shelila
I like this, please continue, I really want to know what's going to happen! Really good beginning!
And if you have time, could you review some of my stuff?
~Shelila~
171ShelilaI like this, please continue, I really want to know what's going to happen! Really good beginning!
And if you have time, could you review some of my stuff?
~Shelila~
8/17/2003 c1 Neko-Girl-Spce
Interesting start. A lot of empahsis on her "boring" and "dull" life. I'm sure that's for a reason. Well I will kep tabs.
Interesting start. A lot of empahsis on her "boring" and "dull" life. I'm sure that's for a reason. Well I will kep tabs.