for Close My Eyes6/20/2004 c17 
17Lady of romance world88
Dallas love Ash? Why does he act weird around her? Why does he avoid her? Poor Dallas that suffered from his mother who left him and his father bully him. I wonder who he will ask for help? Hurry update soon
17Lady of romance world88Dallas love Ash? Why does he act weird around her? Why does he avoid her? Poor Dallas that suffered from his mother who left him and his father bully him. I wonder who he will ask for help? Hurry update soon
6/19/2004 c17 Neko-Girl-Spce
That was...wow. Just breathtaking. Amazing. Best chapter. Keep up the good work, hun.
That was...wow. Just breathtaking. Amazing. Best chapter. Keep up the good work, hun.
6/18/2004 c17 Wolvierine
Wow, this was amazing. I feel like crying and now I want an update. this was definitely the best chapter.
Wow, this was amazing. I feel like crying and now I want an update. this was definitely the best chapter.
6/14/2004 c17 procrastinator
wow.
that's all i can say.
you are an amazing writer. the way you portray the characters is amazing! please update soon :D
wow.
that's all i can say.
you are an amazing writer. the way you portray the characters is amazing! please update soon :D
6/14/2004 c17 12FrenzyFan78
Oh man... I wanna know what happens... *whines* It's a short review, I know, but I don't have much in the way of criticism... so... write more!
~FrenzyFan78
12FrenzyFan78Oh man... I wanna know what happens... *whines* It's a short review, I know, but I don't have much in the way of criticism... so... write more!
~FrenzyFan78
6/14/2004 c17 6Tragedy is Love
no long time no see!
anyway, that was a really great but depressing chapter. it almost seems as if dallas has an - what do they call it - alter-ego or wateva. if only dallas would realise that ash was only trying to help.
6Tragedy is Loveno long time no see!
anyway, that was a really great but depressing chapter. it almost seems as if dallas has an - what do they call it - alter-ego or wateva. if only dallas would realise that ash was only trying to help.
6/13/2004 c17 the lady effie
POR DALLAS! oh man! even though it was sad.. i think this was the best chapter ever... only not.. does that make any sense? i'm about to cry.. i have to go to something happy now...
thanks SO much for updating so quickly though! please do it again.. it was great! *runs away sobbing for dallas*
POR DALLAS! oh man! even though it was sad.. i think this was the best chapter ever... only not.. does that make any sense? i'm about to cry.. i have to go to something happy now...
thanks SO much for updating so quickly though! please do it again.. it was great! *runs away sobbing for dallas*
6/13/2004 c17 Catlynizdabomb
You can't do this to me. I finally can read Dallas's diary and you give me a cliffhanger? AH. omg update soon.
You can't do this to me. I finally can read Dallas's diary and you give me a cliffhanger? AH. omg update soon.
6/13/2004 c16 Catlynizdabomb
Omg I wanna cry. Poor Dallas!
Omg I wanna cry. Poor Dallas!
6/12/2004 c16 13Seraindipity
Ah... watch me cry now. Could use some editing, and some stalling, eerything just happens ridiculously fast. Maybe It's just 'cuz I read fast, I dunno. Anyways, it will g on my favourite stories list, yay! Keep going, you're doing well. And the reason I'm crying is because you left me with a motherf* cliffie. I hate those. Anyways, kudos, to you!
13SeraindipityAh... watch me cry now. Could use some editing, and some stalling, eerything just happens ridiculously fast. Maybe It's just 'cuz I read fast, I dunno. Anyways, it will g on my favourite stories list, yay! Keep going, you're doing well. And the reason I'm crying is because you left me with a motherf* cliffie. I hate those. Anyways, kudos, to you!
6/9/2004 c16 procrastinator
-loves you for writing an awesome story that gives me something to do when i'm bored-
-loves you for writing an awesome story that gives me something to do when i'm bored-
6/4/2004 c16 the lady effie
por dallas! dang it! please update fast so as not to leave me in suspense. crap! dang it! poor dallas! gr.
por dallas! dang it! please update fast so as not to leave me in suspense. crap! dang it! poor dallas! gr.