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12/16/2017 c8 Guest
Uh... Didn't you say it's written already?
8/30/2015 c8 6masterofcharacters
No! What am I to do now? How can I possibly get jack and what happens with Michael and just all of it off my mind. I must finish reading the story. I can't believe that I just read the last posted chapter. I love your story and am upset that I have to wait to read more, especially since from what I read it takes you a little while to post. *sigh* your story is so great that I have no choice but to keep checking up on it. Please post again as soon as you can and as often as possible. I love this story and really want to read more.
8/30/2015 c7 masterofcharacters
I love your story. I hate having to stop to fulfill everyday life needs. Haha. Anyways the only thing that I didn't like about this chapter was that at the end when you started the review appreciation, it didn't have a line and it wasn't bold printed so I thought it was part of the chapter at first. It just took a moment to realize what it was. I was also skimming through the review appreciation and saw that you said Alex and Nicole weren't dating, I thought they were, I know that's kind of stupid but I just thought that they were, anyways I can't wait to read more and I'm gonna read this next chapter that's here. Anyways you're doing a great job, I love this story.
8/28/2015 c2 masterofcharacters
I really like this story. I love how you described the apartment. The only thing was that the switch kind of confused me until I read more into it. I only got to read the first two chapters before bed and can't wait to read more, I want to know more about Jack. That's the only other thing, the chapters are long. Like in real books, which is okay. I guess I just like shorter chapters better because they are easier to read on free time. Anyways the story is great so far, and I can't wait to read more.
6/1/2014 c8 7Salt and Vinegar Pringles
just scrolling through all my old favourites, and Jack popped up! it kills me a little bit to not know what the whole plot entailed! still a great story!
12/25/2013 c8 1A.E. Summers
Yes, it was good. Though I'm not happy. She could've at least told us how it ended before deciding nothing was salvageable.
11/10/2013 c8 2naaaann
Hi! I just wanted to say that this is just brilliant. I read through the whole thing this weekend and I just think it's completely AMAZING. I love how you have so much detail about her life, but still only relevant details that make the readers experience the story better (hard to explain, but you have described her whole "world" and I have thoroughly enjoyed it). I love the plot idea, it is super interesting :) and I love how you have given a nice story and background to pretty much every character! I don't know how you did this without exhausting my inpatient brain.. But good job! :) this is now on my list of favourite fp stories (which consists of three stories) :) even though it's almost ten years since you updated the story, I hope you might read this anyways and smile BECAUSE YOU TOTALLY DESERVE IT, THIS STORY IS INSANELY GOOD. But yeah. Hopefully you might consider continuing this story if you see this, and if not, good luck with whatever you're doing :) I'll be waiting ;) (but don't feel pressured! XD)
Good luck and well done so far! (It is amazing; I just can't express anything through this review, sadly)
7/3/2013 c8 1XDXP
woah. I got book hangover from this.

Thank you for the AN at the end- it cleared up some things for me.
4/27/2013 c8 1tolivelaughlove
Please update. I want to see how the story unfolds. I have so many ideas but no clue how things will end up or what.
4/4/2013 c8 Dominique Diane
Alex is being odd. Oh, God! Michael is Jack, everything is so messed up, is he real? Is she dreaming? Please continue, you haven upload in 8 years!
2/17/2013 c8 Chamelen37
This. Is. Amazing. I just saw that this was last updated in 2005, so I'm really sad now! I hope that you will one day return to the magical land of Fiction Press and finnnnnnaallllllllly finish this FREAKIN' AMAZING STORY! Please... I'm begging you to pleeeeeaaaaaase Finish. This. Story. It wouldn't just make my day... it would make my life.
12/22/2012 c8 4R. Ficst
Noooooo! Too soon too soon! I've been cut off too soon! Do you think you could maybe even just post a summary of what's supposed to happen if you plan to never come back to it? I want to know 'n'
12/22/2012 c1 R. Ficst
Oooo you're making me love this and hate this... because I see that you last updated in 2005, and it's not marked "completed," so I'm just going to get cut off at some point, and I can tell you I love it already.

I'm going to read as much as I can, and click "follow" on the off chance that you might one day return.
4/21/2011 c8 LivinLyfe2TheFullest
NO theres no more chapters at this point *sniffle sniffle* :'(

i love this story and your idea for it, its so cool :D

btw i'm supposed to tell you if i want to be alerted of a new chapter right?

4/21/2011 c3 LivinLyfe2TheFullest
omg this would be so cool but depressing if it was based on a true story

like having an imaginary friend though theyre and adult and when you graduate from high school they disapear and you hurt and never feel quite as full again

btw does elise know about something? cuz i think she does with like that book she gave Nicole and that other person is Jack

i really wish you finish this story but probably not gonna happen :(
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