for Jack10/10/2009 c1 deactivated account sorry
Man, you nearly had me crying by the end of the prologue. I'm going to continue reading it after my final examination which is in one week's time. (sigh). Anyways, I spotted a few typos and "eaten-up words". Ohter than that, I like it. (smile)
Man, you nearly had me crying by the end of the prologue. I'm going to continue reading it after my final examination which is in one week's time. (sigh). Anyways, I spotted a few typos and "eaten-up words". Ohter than that, I like it. (smile)
6/26/2009 c8 Guest
Why is the next chapter not up, I wanna know more about this Patrick guy. Please update even though its been so long...
Why is the next chapter not up, I wanna know more about this Patrick guy. Please update even though its been so long...
6/24/2009 c8 
1Foohypink
Really good story I read it all in one day, and I loved it so much can't get enough of it. ^_^ keep up the good work and please pretty please update soon with a cherry on top. n_n Thanks!
1FoohypinkReally good story I read it all in one day, and I loved it so much can't get enough of it. ^_^ keep up the good work and please pretty please update soon with a cherry on top. n_n Thanks!
6/17/2009 c8 trophyqueen
PLEASE UPDATE. I really love this story. i wanna know what will happen next with jack and nicole :(
come back!
PLEASE UPDATE. I really love this story. i wanna know what will happen next with jack and nicole :(
come back!
6/6/2009 c8 sappyromancelvr
Ugh.
I know you haven't updated i years, but please?
For all of these people waiting, no dying to read the next chapter?
You are a fantastic writer, but instead of suspense being a good thing, its now tormenting us. :(
Please please update. You'd make a lot of people's day.
Ugh.
I know you haven't updated i years, but please?
For all of these people waiting, no dying to read the next chapter?
You are a fantastic writer, but instead of suspense being a good thing, its now tormenting us. :(
Please please update. You'd make a lot of people's day.
4/8/2009 c1 K0ala
So strange. I was at the library and came across "Sunday at Tiffany's" by James Patterson, and the summary of it seriously reminded me of it. So weird! But, I'm hoping you'll update this eventually.
So strange. I was at the library and came across "Sunday at Tiffany's" by James Patterson, and the summary of it seriously reminded me of it. So weird! But, I'm hoping you'll update this eventually.
12/21/2008 c8 3Mitaku-Oyasin
You need to update soon! Even though it's been years... but in your last chapter you said the next one was already written! Post anything, even if it's rough.. I want to find out what will happen next!
3Mitaku-OyasinYou need to update soon! Even though it's been years... but in your last chapter you said the next one was already written! Post anything, even if it's rough.. I want to find out what will happen next!
11/25/2008 c2 10Aurora Corona
Great story! Too bad you haven't updated for three years... I would've loved to read more about Jack
10Aurora CoronaGreat story! Too bad you haven't updated for three years... I would've loved to read more about Jack