for Pain for Pleasure2/11/2008 c18 
5HeatherLee
wow i dont know whether to hate that ending or accept it as inevitable. either way that was a really good story and i like your writing style
5HeatherLeewow i dont know whether to hate that ending or accept it as inevitable. either way that was a really good story and i like your writing style
4/5/2005 c18 7R.A. Sears
You should definitely do a prequel. If the things you wrote here in her memory were part of it, it could be great. And don't get discouraged... Some people rewrite a piece 50 times before they get it how they want it to be.
7R.A. SearsYou should definitely do a prequel. If the things you wrote here in her memory were part of it, it could be great. And don't get discouraged... Some people rewrite a piece 50 times before they get it how they want it to be.
4/5/2005 c17 R.A. Sears
GACK! HOW COULD YOU KILL MY SERJ?
*sniffles*
By the way, the start of the sequel to "In Circumspect" is posted.
GACK! HOW COULD YOU KILL MY SERJ?
*sniffles*
By the way, the start of the sequel to "In Circumspect" is posted.
3/2/2005 c18 Melissa Lea Night
goddamn, so sad...i wanna cry for her! please do tell more about her life before this story, please!
goddamn, so sad...i wanna cry for her! please do tell more about her life before this story, please!
3/2/2005 c17 Melissa Lea Night
*screams* no! serj! *cries* very good chapter, and i'd love to read about autumn before this as well as serj, pretty please with blood on top!
*screams* no! serj! *cries* very good chapter, and i'd love to read about autumn before this as well as serj, pretty please with blood on top!
3/2/2005 c16 Melissa Lea Night
those lycans are pathetic, they should be more informed. but damn, suddenly i hate devin, playing dirty by druggin' her. good job!
those lycans are pathetic, they should be more informed. but damn, suddenly i hate devin, playing dirty by druggin' her. good job!
2/21/2005 c18 KLA
I love this story. The end was so sad...I hope you do decide to write Serj and Autumns backgrounds, I'd love to read them. And I don't think you should give up on this story just yet. You have a lot of creativeness. Don't give up just because it hasn't turned out the way you wanted. Keep writing!
I love this story. The end was so sad...I hope you do decide to write Serj and Autumns backgrounds, I'd love to read them. And I don't think you should give up on this story just yet. You have a lot of creativeness. Don't give up just because it hasn't turned out the way you wanted. Keep writing!
1/24/2005 c17 neilfatea
Do what you need to do. I've enjoyed it both times, thanks
Do what you need to do. I've enjoyed it both times, thanks
1/23/2005 c17 28amaya dwyn
that was so awesome, m , it reminds me of a drawing in black ink, aAH, that was so cool.
28amaya dwynthat was so awesome, m , it reminds me of a drawing in black ink, aAH, that was so cool.
1/13/2005 c1 cruentus orexis
DETAIL! You need to add more detail, especially during dialogue. Also, the sentences are too choppy. Great idea, though! ^^
DETAIL! You need to add more detail, especially during dialogue. Also, the sentences are too choppy. Great idea, though! ^^
1/3/2005 c16 kate molly anders
gr8 story. well writen but fix the ending.
gr8 story. well writen but fix the ending.
1/1/2005 c16 4Lady Katreina
Wow!... ^_^ eh heh heh...Well I really like it...I dunno what else to say...but thank you for updating ^_^
4Lady KatreinaWow!... ^_^ eh heh heh...Well I really like it...I dunno what else to say...but thank you for updating ^_^