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10/11/2003 c1 35Kyaroru Fanel
I'm not sure I like the unreal plot going on it this, but I love the way you use your words...very descriptive and provocative.
9/19/2003 c1 5GypsyQueen
Very good! I don't post my actual poetry on the net anymore, but I really respect those willing to put their stuff up here. I really loved the last two lines of the first stanza, and the way you built up tension in the last stanza. Again, that was very well done.

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