for He Gives8/5/2004 c1 
37KM Barringer
*blinks a few times* I'm not going to flame because I believe in people having seperate opinions. I am simply going to sit here and write a depressing poem about religion.
37KM Barringer*blinks a few times* I'm not going to flame because I believe in people having seperate opinions. I am simply going to sit here and write a depressing poem about religion.
4/2/2004 c1 127Eirien
This is so beautiful, so moving and so true. I hope it will touch hearts as it has touched mine. ;-)
127EirienThis is so beautiful, so moving and so true. I hope it will touch hearts as it has touched mine. ;-)
4/1/2004 c1 191mmoonsshiner
Thanks for the reviw!. Im not big on haiku's but i must say (although i do not share your beliefs) that this is a very inspirational poem.Its very well written and the delivery is beautiful. Great job, may you be blessed for sharing it with those who need hear.^^.
~Nat
191mmoonsshinerThanks for the reviw!. Im not big on haiku's but i must say (although i do not share your beliefs) that this is a very inspirational poem.Its very well written and the delivery is beautiful. Great job, may you be blessed for sharing it with those who need hear.^^.
~Nat
3/7/2004 c1 2mks-wannabe
i really liked that ^_^ that wuz really good and so true. you keep up the good work as well.
-mKs
2mks-wannabei really liked that ^_^ that wuz really good and so true. you keep up the good work as well.
-mKs
1/19/2004 c1 3Emerald Ember
that...i love. no words can describe it really. its just truth, utter truth; put together in your awesome original way...
ps i like the verse at the bottom, god will do great things with your talent...1 corinthians 2:9 (read it plz, its one of my fav verses)
3Emerald Emberthat...i love. no words can describe it really. its just truth, utter truth; put together in your awesome original way...
ps i like the verse at the bottom, god will do great things with your talent...1 corinthians 2:9 (read it plz, its one of my fav verses)
12/31/2003 c1 18InSpiteOf
I enjoyed these haikus particularly... I love that scripture and the depth of meaning behind it. The image of healing, hope, and restoration is so powerful...
18InSpiteOfI enjoyed these haikus particularly... I love that scripture and the depth of meaning behind it. The image of healing, hope, and restoration is so powerful...
12/14/2003 c1 148JJR Meerraf
Great stuff! It's cool to see you write something completely religious! Loved it, seriously! Excellent work again!
God bless!
148JJR MeerrafGreat stuff! It's cool to see you write something completely religious! Loved it, seriously! Excellent work again!
God bless!
10/31/2003 c1 Sycho Skitz
You've probably been told this before by so many others, but you are truly talented with words. This poem is beautiful...very inspiring and so true. I love it.
-Skitz
You've probably been told this before by so many others, but you are truly talented with words. This poem is beautiful...very inspiring and so true. I love it.
-Skitz
10/16/2003 c1 4Niph speaks
A! Ashley! You are such a blessing. Thank you for posting this poem, and the verse. The verse I used in witnessing to a friend online. Thanks for the encouragement you've given me on my writing, and please pray for my friend... ^^ love you.
4Niph speaksA! Ashley! You are such a blessing. Thank you for posting this poem, and the verse. The verse I used in witnessing to a friend online. Thanks for the encouragement you've given me on my writing, and please pray for my friend... ^^ love you.