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7/18/2012 c1 1Locked Up Secrets
It's a beautiful idea and I love how bold and expressive you are. However, the thoughts are slightly disjointed and there's no punctuation except for in two places, in the middle of the poem and at the end, which makes it read as basically one whole sentence. With a bit of editing, this piece could be excellent.
9/20/2004 c1 Moroni's Daughter
This is beautiful. I don't know how you do it.
1/17/2001 c1 4snookems
Awesome stuff! I love your poems. I love poems that are religious to. :):)
1/10/2001 c1 1BobbtheElf
oooooooooooooooo . . . Kudos to you. I really like this one. *Bobb's stamp of approval*
12/23/2000 c1 Angel Wing2
This is a very good poem. I really like it.
12/12/2000 c1 47PM20
I like it, but its kinda sad
12/12/2000 c1 23AngelGirl
oooh... i *really* like this! very good! :)
12/12/2000 c1 2Alexis Rockford
weird . . .

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