for Stage11/2/2003 c1 
21Moulin Rouge21
are you talking about just the stage..or the person who is nervous?
Stage of fear
Stage of sorrow
Stage of love
Stage of tomorrow.
that's what caught my eye.. good poem.
21Moulin Rouge21are you talking about just the stage..or the person who is nervous?
Stage of fear
Stage of sorrow
Stage of love
Stage of tomorrow.
that's what caught my eye.. good poem.
9/14/2003 c1 1Bish
wow, that was so good! It describes what the person is feeling do well.. 'take another deep breath and swallow...'
I love the last stanza. :)
-bish.
1Bishwow, that was so good! It describes what the person is feeling do well.. 'take another deep breath and swallow...'
I love the last stanza. :)
-bish.
8/22/2003 c1 45SammieGrl
This poem is GREAT! I perform a lot-dancing, singing, acting, etc.-and I feel that you have really captured how a performer feels. :)
45SammieGrlThis poem is GREAT! I perform a lot-dancing, singing, acting, etc.-and I feel that you have really captured how a performer feels. :)
8/20/2003 c1 Lusofil
Like a previous reviewer, I'm not a performer either, but I understand the agony of self consciousness so well portrayed here.
Like a previous reviewer, I'm not a performer either, but I understand the agony of self consciousness so well portrayed here.
8/20/2003 c1 2divinewhimsy
Too true, but I don't sing, nor act, its just how I feel whenever I stand in front of a crowd.
You wrote this really well and you pt feelings into words which sometimes can be hard to do.
Nice writing style (well poetry) and hope it improves even more. (Not that it needs to.)
Bya-
D+D
2divinewhimsyToo true, but I don't sing, nor act, its just how I feel whenever I stand in front of a crowd.
You wrote this really well and you pt feelings into words which sometimes can be hard to do.
Nice writing style (well poetry) and hope it improves even more. (Not that it needs to.)
Bya-
D+D
8/19/2003 c1 Priscilla
true and funny
true and funny