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8/21/2003 c1 vick
HIYA BESTY BESTY BUDDY OF NEVERNEVERLAND! lol dont ask im feeling particularly hy cuz i finished my hw BEFORE FOUR THIRTY! CAN U BELIEVE IT? UNHEARD OF, DUDE!

lol, to the person who wanted me to actually post personally, HI IM VICKY! haha, i had absolutely no clue this was here ^_^; *glares at coffee chocolate girl* hahah im jay kuh-ay n_n

thank u for all ur great comments! i had no idea mr buckleys comments had that much fx on my writing...on my classification essay he had written a lot on my style, so when i was bored waiting for one of my friends to come home, i just randomly started another one ^_^; glad u guyz liked it! if school hadnt just started maybe id actually write another one ^_^;

hey, this little notice thingy at the bottom of the box is right. "it is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. a well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer" okaly doke, if i write anything i actually like ill email it to u, kkz starpush? lol where the heck did u get starpush...
8/20/2003 c1 7silver coins
the reason she din post it herself is cuz she doesnt even know it's up here.. i have yet to tell her ^_^

about the clingy follower- if you think she's being "vicious" you have yet to hear us about our clingy follower. there actually is a girl who is like that. vicky's not exaggerating.

neways, this essay is full of a lot of inside jokes/ish things :)
8/20/2003 c1 6Lady Gerbil
aw..that wuz so real.i luv it.reminds me of my friends and stuff..specially the clingy follower..
8/20/2003 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
Why can't she post her own stuff? I don't get you people!

Well, tell her that this was breathtakingly beautifully written. She is a fantastic writer and I really mean it- her words fit together perfectly and form vivid images in my mind. Seriously. There are a lot of talented writers here on FP.net, but Vicky is one of the best I've seen.

The whole thing about the Clingy Follower sounded sort of vicious, though. I'm glad our class and grade has matured enough not to have those cliques.

But her descriptions of people are so vivid! I especially liked the way she described you... it was you, right? The butterfly? I can really identify with the things she said there, and her description is absolutely magnificent.

Make her post her own stuff, so I can review her directly!

m~* Sunflower, anyone?

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