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7/31/2004 c1 135Lauren Raven
Tres interessant...I like it. Great job, keep writing. Kudos to Radyn, that's how I found you.
6/22/2004 c1 2Faerunner
^^ another great work. People say I'm good, but I look around and find those like you who are better yet.
I loved the leaf/idea analogy, original ideas are the best :)
~Fae
5/22/2004 c1 8Aureya of Chocolate
nah, people fall in love with their best friends in real life, too.
:)
11/22/2003 c1 82Linnet
That was absolutely fabulous! It was poetically worded but still having an air of beautiful simplicity. I love the theme, and the 'scattered leaves' is a beautiful way to start and end your story. It deserved to win a place in a literary contest (congratulations!) The last sentence was wonderful, and the best part was that the end wasn't too sappy. It was perfect. I'm in awe...

- Agent A A A
8/19/2003 c1 112Kazuline
i just love it... "the withered memories of summer green" how poetic and beautiful... the ending made me laugh, "To hell with order ...scattered for a little while longer" was just so good. you did a lot in a relatively small amount of space but not too much. awesome job!

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