for Sinner12/22/2003 c1 
53Reverie-Knights
Very nicely done short poem - I like. In spite of it's rather breif but I find that you managed to create an idea you tried to made up rather sucessful. Hats off to you and your wonderous choice of words. I think I like the first line the best, just because it is the one thing that sort of keeps me reading. I've noticed this about you, just so that you know. Heh.
I'm not much of a poet, or at least I never thought of myself of one. I'm more of a story writer, which is why my poetry sucks to an extent (with a few exceptions.). Just thought that you should know that. Heh.
53Reverie-KnightsVery nicely done short poem - I like. In spite of it's rather breif but I find that you managed to create an idea you tried to made up rather sucessful. Hats off to you and your wonderous choice of words. I think I like the first line the best, just because it is the one thing that sort of keeps me reading. I've noticed this about you, just so that you know. Heh.
I'm not much of a poet, or at least I never thought of myself of one. I'm more of a story writer, which is why my poetry sucks to an extent (with a few exceptions.). Just thought that you should know that. Heh.