for Breathing Truth9/16/2003 c1 
22White Arab
Love the layout. Makes it quick and to the point. And the words you've chosen are great too.
I'm not a huge fan of the last three or four lines, for some reason...they irk me a little...but on the whole, it's another great poem. You have quite a lot of talent, and you use it well. You have my respect.
Whitearab
22White ArabLove the layout. Makes it quick and to the point. And the words you've chosen are great too.
I'm not a huge fan of the last three or four lines, for some reason...they irk me a little...but on the whole, it's another great poem. You have quite a lot of talent, and you use it well. You have my respect.
Whitearab
9/12/2003 c1 145dfgsfdghftgt44
That was pretty good. I liked the formatting you chose to write that in. I think it looks cool how it's got a few words on each line. Great job!
You have a ram named Booster? How cute!
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
145dfgsfdghftgt44That was pretty good. I liked the formatting you chose to write that in. I think it looks cool how it's got a few words on each line. Great job!
You have a ram named Booster? How cute!
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame