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10/3/2003 c1 79Groovy Angel
Nice use of rhyming - I like rhyming poems too. I cant believe that you 10 and writing poetry this good. whew. Keep writing. In 10 yeqars time you'll be a poetry genius!
8/21/2003 c1 46SinNombre26
very good poem, the rythm is good and it all flows except for that one line "like there's no tomorrow" it just doesnt fit. But i still like the poem nice job.

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