for Still Alone10/3/2003 c1 
79Groovy Angel
Nice use of rhyming - I like rhyming poems too. I cant believe that you 10 and writing poetry this good. whew. Keep writing. In 10 yeqars time you'll be a poetry genius!
79Groovy AngelNice use of rhyming - I like rhyming poems too. I cant believe that you 10 and writing poetry this good. whew. Keep writing. In 10 yeqars time you'll be a poetry genius!
8/21/2003 c1 46SinNombre26
very good poem, the rythm is good and it all flows except for that one line "like there's no tomorrow" it just doesnt fit. But i still like the poem nice job.
46SinNombre26very good poem, the rythm is good and it all flows except for that one line "like there's no tomorrow" it just doesnt fit. But i still like the poem nice job.