for Clean10/8/2003 c1 
11Squirrelmistress
All right, ordinarily I'd offer some sort of constructive criticism, but I can't for this.
Yeah, it's that good.
It made me cry.
11SquirrelmistressAll right, ordinarily I'd offer some sort of constructive criticism, but I can't for this.
Yeah, it's that good.
It made me cry.
10/4/2003 c1 4ColorCrayons
wow, this was really strong writing here. great job with it
~color outside the lines~
4ColorCrayonswow, this was really strong writing here. great job with it
~color outside the lines~
8/21/2003 c1 46SinNombre26
very cool, the rythm and rhyming work perfectly for the poem. Job well done
46SinNombre26very cool, the rythm and rhyming work perfectly for the poem. Job well done