for The Glorious Misadventures of KAYLA11/27/2003 c2 
34nathalsa
O_o Well, this was...interesting. You might want to work on some variation...almost all of your paragraphs are one line. However, nonetheless, it is very good and I love the humor in it. I've never had much of one except a few small additions which are very obscure and that only I normally understand. Don't forget what I said about description...live it, breathe it, think it. Very good! I'm impressed!
34nathalsaO_o Well, this was...interesting. You might want to work on some variation...almost all of your paragraphs are one line. However, nonetheless, it is very good and I love the humor in it. I've never had much of one except a few small additions which are very obscure and that only I normally understand. Don't forget what I said about description...live it, breathe it, think it. Very good! I'm impressed!
11/27/2003 c1 nathalsa
All right, I've just begun this. The instant I read the first line, I knew I had to review for each chapter-which, might I say, I have never done before. I am also adding you to author alert and all of its minions. ^^o Anyway, this first chapter was quite enjoyable. I laughed throughout most of it. I loved your description of the mother, however, don't forget to describe everything else! Also, please, new paragraphs when someone new is talking. Makes things much less confusing, you know? One last question for you: do you have a beta? *laughs* If you don't, I would love to beta this fic once I finish reading it. Send me an e-mail, hmm?
All right, I've just begun this. The instant I read the first line, I knew I had to review for each chapter-which, might I say, I have never done before. I am also adding you to author alert and all of its minions. ^^o Anyway, this first chapter was quite enjoyable. I laughed throughout most of it. I loved your description of the mother, however, don't forget to describe everything else! Also, please, new paragraphs when someone new is talking. Makes things much less confusing, you know? One last question for you: do you have a beta? *laughs* If you don't, I would love to beta this fic once I finish reading it. Send me an e-mail, hmm?
11/26/2003 c14 Cleena
COLLEGEBOARD.COM? The horror! The horror! Anything but that! Hey, Joe should work for Collegebowl.com...or be the creator or something...and TJC is the total antithesis of the evil SAT's and college Apps...just a thought
COLLEGEBOARD.COM? The horror! The horror! Anything but that! Hey, Joe should work for Collegebowl.com...or be the creator or something...and TJC is the total antithesis of the evil SAT's and college Apps...just a thought
11/5/2003 c12 spookiekerri
Erm, on my planet we refer to everything outside our own atmosphere as outer space- I think. Don't quote me on that."
WHOO! its yes! YAY! now can i eat some paste? ^_^
Erm, on my planet we refer to everything outside our own atmosphere as outer space- I think. Don't quote me on that."
WHOO! its yes! YAY! now can i eat some paste? ^_^
10/17/2003 c8 kaytay
omg...i want more...i've finished it and i wanna know what happens!
omg...i want more...i've finished it and i wanna know what happens!
10/1/2003 c9 3Anja Kirk
Genius! I love it! Especially Jack Rabbit Slim's- oh we really must go there someday! *sigh* Did you know that there's a jonny rockets on the cruise we're going on? -teehee
3Anja KirkGenius! I love it! Especially Jack Rabbit Slim's- oh we really must go there someday! *sigh* Did you know that there's a jonny rockets on the cruise we're going on? -teehee
9/26/2003 c8 Cleena
Not...THE mystery juice? The mystery juice of slumber parties, of truth or dare, or "let's gross aimee out"? Surely not THAT mystery juice! *gasps* *thinks of the taste of mystery juice* *gags*
Not...THE mystery juice? The mystery juice of slumber parties, of truth or dare, or "let's gross aimee out"? Surely not THAT mystery juice! *gasps* *thinks of the taste of mystery juice* *gags*
9/18/2003 c7 Cleena
BOOTY!
BOOTY!
9/18/2003 c7 Cleena
BOOTY!
BOOTY!
9/18/2003 c5 Cleena
Kurze aufgaben oft! OFT! OFT!
Kurze aufgaben oft! OFT! OFT!
9/11/2003 c1 2krazykity16
Hee. found it. Or, well, c'leen found it and sent it to me. but yay! ^_^
*applause*
2krazykity16Hee. found it. Or, well, c'leen found it and sent it to me. but yay! ^_^
*applause*