9/1/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
Intense..

Wow, this was powerful, shocking too..

I can't say how much I loved this song, it was so easy to relate to and I could practically here the tune in my head..

The piece has great rhythm and tempo to go with the meaningful lyrics.. If I could hear the actual music, that would have even further amplified my liking for it..

Great choice of words.. It was powerful, emotional and very moving.. The whole piece had this way it reaches out to the reader..

Nice flow, beautiful in a way..

I liked the anger and the agony potrayal in the song..

Its wonderful, and the whole song fit in nicely, especially the ending..

Fantastic piece, it really reached out to me..

Keep writing, this really was good..

~Shadafakup