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10/25/2003 c1 77Vlaadimir
I really enjoyed this poem, and I especially liked the last stanza.
8/25/2003 c1 Dude
Not bad, I some what see what your saying. I don't know about poetry though so I can't tell you wether the ryming and such was good, but all in all, its not bad.
8/23/2003 c1 Needa S
It's the same old, same old,

everyone has been told,

some say there's nothing to gain,

but in the end there will be much pain.
8/23/2003 c1 1cooldas
really good...love the detail and the choice of words...
8/22/2003 c1 3careless whisper
interesting outlook, the flow just needs some work.
8/22/2003 c1 612simpleplan13
cool poem... the ending is very good... i like it a lot... it relaly makes you think... thanks for the review

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