for Not Exactly An Atheist8/25/2003 c1 Dude
Not bad, I some what see what your saying. I don't know about poetry though so I can't tell you wether the ryming and such was good, but all in all, its not bad.
Not bad, I some what see what your saying. I don't know about poetry though so I can't tell you wether the ryming and such was good, but all in all, its not bad.
8/23/2003 c1 Needa S
It's the same old, same old,
everyone has been told,
some say there's nothing to gain,
but in the end there will be much pain.
It's the same old, same old,
everyone has been told,
some say there's nothing to gain,
but in the end there will be much pain.
8/22/2003 c1 
612simpleplan13
cool poem... the ending is very good... i like it a lot... it relaly makes you think... thanks for the review
612simpleplan13cool poem... the ending is very good... i like it a lot... it relaly makes you think... thanks for the review