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8/22/2003 c1 23comtesssorelli
That was a very good poem. The rhyme, the content... It sounds oddly familiar, and therefore believable. Yes, it was nice, and so multifaceted! There are many different sensations the reader may feel when reading this. I think you succeeded in the common goal of writers of making the reader feel exactly what the author does. Good job :)
8/22/2003 c1 Ghost Shadow
It's really well done, how you slip the rhyme in at all the perfect places where it'd click. The lesson at the end, it's appropriately placed, and set up perfectly. Really well done. It reminds me of what I wrote awhile ago, called "Always a Friend" which I feel is like a complement to this one.

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