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3/11/2007 c1 34Sweet Persephone
I like this one a lot.
7/6/2005 c1 21Drops of Acid
one...no two words...DEEP and GOOD!

Keep it up and review more of my poems or I will sue you! No I am kidding...kinda...

Skullz
6/5/2005 c1 The Postscript
wow...really makes you think. i can relate to always playing it safe and being scared to make mistakes and such, i like the rhyming, and your poem really flows. great job, keep writing!
4/22/2005 c1 addie pray
Nice poem, good rhyme. You spelled 'dying' wrong. Other than that, this was cute.
4/21/2005 c1 110KonekOniko
personally, i LOVE this poem. very well written, and i love the idea in it. personally, i go with my intuition (and my loyalty to certain people). i think a lot of people can relate to this poem, it's very down-to-earth and true. we're all trying so0o hard to try to be these perfect lil girls or boys when human perfection lies in our own imperfections. lol, i sound like i'm preaching, don't i? well, i love this poem, and i hope to see a lot more from you!

~Sumi-chan; What you call love, I call pain.

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